Wikipedia:Peer review/2006 Asian Games/archive1

2006 Asian Games edit

I've listed this article for peer review because i want to improve to good article standard or even featured article standard. The article is well written, but i think it still have space to be improve, and i also want to know how to write a long lead section in this article.

Thanks,

Aleen f1 09:08, 24 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I think the sections about the opening and closing ceremonies were overly long and excessively detailed. Consider shortening those a little. I also doubt the necessity to include all the countries in which the Games were broadcasted.
Consider expanding the section on the highlights of the Games.
...many believed that the organisers did not have plans to deal with it...
Citation needed.
Sources say there were only so many buses, which were quickly filled...
Citation needed.
Many volunteers have been complaining about the lack of transportation needed to take them to their locations...
Citation needed.

Otherwise, I think you have done good work thus far.DrWeetAls 10:37, 28 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]