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Cuisine of the Thirteen Colonies edit

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Result: Delisted. Steelkamp (talk) 05:28, 8 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

So this might just be me reaching too far for something. The article uses general references so there doesn't seem to be much citation issues (though "Beer was not only consumed for its flavor and alcohol content, but because it was safer to drink than water, which often harbored disease-causing microorganisms. Even children drank small beer." needs to be cited). However, my main problem is the prose. There's so many choppy 1-2 sentence paragraphs that make this feel cluttered and I feel as if that's a problem that could be fixed. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:30, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I do personally have a problem with the general references and that has to do with citation 5 being [Fischer, pp. 74, 114, 134–39.]. Though i'm kind of ok with general references, this is 3 different sections and eight different pages of a source and I don't feel that the general reference is used correctly there. Onegreatjoke (talk) 16:37, 30 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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