Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Alexander Onassis/1

Alexander Onassis

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Result: Withdrew, not the right venue for this action. Retrohead (talk) 11:14, 6 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am submitting this article for GAR as suggested by User:SNUGGUMS on the article's talk page who conducted the original review. I amended/fixed the article based on their insightful suggestions. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 11:57, 15 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Promote after a couple of minor fixes - The issues SNUGGUMS discussed were gone. Just a couple more I found. Thanks, ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 18:51, 15 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
- Perhaps adding the |death_cause= and |resting_place= parameters in the infobox
- There are a lot of sentences starting with "Onassis" in the lead that makes it just sound weird
- Perhaps mention Thyssen in the lead
- Note Onassis's place of birth in the lead, not too specific, just the city or the state.
- Did he die on scene or in hospital?

I've further amended it. Gareth E Kegg (talk) 22:54, 15 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Note: Gareth E Kegg, this isn't the venue where we promote articles that failed the GA review. You can only demote articles from the GA status here, but not upgrade them. You should re-nominate the article and receive proper review.--Retrohead (talk) 17:41, 5 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]