Wikipedia:Featured picture candidates/Allied naval operations off Japan

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Original – Map showing air attacks on Japan during the Second World War (1945)
 
Edit 1 – Recolour (no topography), fix typos, add long/lat amounts.
Reason
SVG format; complicated information that is not easily replicated in text form; clear presentation; standard colours; very informative to the reader; US military source.
Articles in which this image appears
Air raids on Japan, Allied naval bombardments of Japan during World War II (newly replaced raster version [latter only])
FP category for this image
Diagrams, drawings, and maps
Creator
Grandiose
Could I possibly call a Pause for a couple of hours whilst I take these points on board? Thanks. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 10:01, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Edit 1 now uploaded. (Some of the original labels were very hard to read; if I've made any more transcription errors, I will not hesitate to correct them. However, the IP's ones were the actually the ones I was most unsure of.) Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 10:48, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I did for the dozen or so I thought I'd got wrong - the ones pointed out were next in line. I don't have the few hours doing all of them would take. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 13:13, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support edit 1 I made a couple of minor edits to the shading, aquatic typeface etc. I also smoothed out the latitude lines that I mentioned on your talk page (forgive me for being presumptuous but I assumed you didn't understand what I was talking about there). Hope that's okay. Matthewedwards :  Chat  18:06, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support edit 1 This is an excellent map, and a big improvement on the US military original. I'm very grateful for Grandiose developing this for the Air raids on Japan article (which is currently at FAC). My only comment is that 'Sasebp' on Kyushu should be 'Sasebo' Nick-D (talk) 23:25, 28 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Now corrected. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 10:13, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed. Grandiose (me, talk, contribs) 14:24, 29 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Not Promoted --Papa Lima Whiskey 2 20:44, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]