Wikipedia:Featured list removal candidates/List of San Jose Sharks players/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list removal nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was kept by The Rambling Man 16:02, 11 July 2009 [1].
List of San Jose Sharks players edit
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I am nominating this for featured list removal because it is not up to current standards, like the NJD and CBJ lists. It's got a small lead, few references, and multiple other problems. – (iMatthew • talk) at 17:52, 24 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I agree the lead needs to be fixed up, references however are fine as there doesn't need to be a huge number of references, the reference that are there just have to cover all the information which I think the references there do since they all list the players and the stats which is all this list is really about. -Djsasso (talk) 18:17, 24 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Concerns
- The first sentence in the lead...is obsolete. No bolded links, no word "complete"...
- There should be at least two paragraphs in the lead.
- Definitely needs updating. What is it, a month since the 2008-09 season ended?
- The Key section needs tidying up a little. Those 3 tables are randomly placed. example
- The note about "seasons column" is missing here, see the example above.
- None of the references mention captaincy and award winners; citations are needed.
- Boldface should be avoided in tables; the only exception is the heading.
- A little info about "rotating captaincy" would be a plus.
- There should be links to the 2008-09 media guide pages.
--Crzycheetah 04:58, 2 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment See List of Detroit Red Wings players and List of Chicago Blackhawks players for examples of FL NHL players lists that are up to standard. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:25, 3 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I rewrote the lead a bit. Hopefully someone else can help finished the job since I am not interested (and don't know much about it) in hockey at all.—Chris! ct 23:13, 6 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Remove – The lead still needs some expansion, and a cite should be provided for the end of the first paragraph. Several of Crzycheetah's comments remain unresolved as well, notably the one about the list being a year out-of-date. Giants2008 (17-14) 22:20, 7 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist Lead looks a little better, but much more needs to be done to bring this up to FL standards. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:35, 9 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - Dabomb or Giant: Are you guys willing to help me save this? I need some more helps. I already started with the lead.—Chris! ct 17:46, 9 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment The pictures need alternative text. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:48, 10 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Gave the lead a few more sentences. It still could use more expansion, but it's a good start. I'll be on vacation the next two days, but will try to do more after this weekend. Giants2008 (17-14) 19:35, 10 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- My lack of knowledge on the team or hockey prevented me from adding more. But, I will try.—Chris! ct 01:31, 11 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Please withdraw this FLRC. I'll get around to fixing it when I have a chance. iMatthew talk at 14:34, 11 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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