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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 18:59, 15 November 2008 [1].

Timeline of the 2003 Atlantic hurricane season edit

I am nominating this page as a featured list candidate because I believe it meets the standards for a Featured list. It is also a great addition to the almost, in my opinion, one of the best series of articles from WPTC, the 2003 Atlantic hurricane season. All thoughts and comments are welcome. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 16:10, 5 November 2008

Support- This article is very well written.--Kirk76 1854 Atlantic Hurricane Season 20:52, 5 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 13:35, 6 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:30, 8 November 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "This timeline..." Don't start the article like this, start with a contextual lead sentence: "The 2003 Atlantic hurricane season was an active Atlantic hurricane season with tropical activity before and after the official bounds of the season – the first such occurrence in 50 years." Do not bold. Move the sentence describing the timeline to the end of the first paragraph.
  • Why is there an empty graphic with colored bars at the beginning of the timeline?
    • Still haven't answered the question. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "due the the impact caused in Bermuda" Typo?
    • Not fixed, the first "the" needs to be a "to". Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Hurricane Fabian, Hurricane Isabel, and Hurricane Juan all had their names"
  • "Both Fabian and Juan were the worst hurricanes to hit their respective areas causing a total of $450 million in damages and 16 fatalities."-->Both Fabian and Juan were the worst hurricanes to hit their respective areas, causing $450 million in damages and 16 fatalities. Needs a source also.
  • "This season had 21 tropical depressions, 16 named storms, seven hurricanes, and three major hurricanes, i.e. those" Per WP:MOSNUM, write comparative quantities consistently (either spell them all out or write them all as digits). Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (abbreviations), i.e. should be in italics. Link [[Tropical cyclone scales|major hurricanes]].
    • Not fixed, i.e still needs to be in italics and seven-->7. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The most notable storms of the season were the three storms which had their names retired." This sentence is reptitious, I suggest that you delete it.
  • Isabel peaked as a powerful Category 5 hurricane over the open waters of the Atlantic before weakening to a category two and impacting the east coast of the United States causing $3.6 billion in damages and 51 fatalities.-->Isabel peaked as a Category 5 hurricane over the open waters of the Atlantic; however, it weakened to a category two before impacting the east coast of the United States, causing $3.6 billion in damages and 51 fatalities. This sentence also needs a source.
    • One more thing: Shouldn't "category two"-->Category 2? Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Hurricane Isabel strengthens into a Category 5 hurricane, becoming the strongest storm of the season with winds peaking at 165 mph (270 km/h) and a minimum pressure of 915 mbar (hPa; (27.03 inHg)."-->Hurricane Isabel strengthens into a Category 5 hurricane, becoming the strongest storm of the season; winds peaked at 165 mph (270 km/h) and the minimum pressure was 915 mbar (hPa; (27.03 inHg).
    • Not fixed, "peaking"-->peak and "minimum pressure was"-->minimum pressure is. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Tropical Storm Ana looses tropical characteristics"—Typo.
  • "Tropical Storm Mindy forms 80 mi (130 km) northeast" Why is this the only measurement that is abbreviated?
  • Spell out what NOAA stands for. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:10, 7 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    • Comment I believe I have corrected the addressed problems. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 17:39, 7 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      • There are still quite a few things you haven't addressed. I replied to those individual issuse above. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Oops, my bad. I'll go fix those now. As for the timeline image, there is a bug on the site, there's nothing I can do for now since it's affecting all newly created timeline images. It has been reported by Matthiasb as bug 16085. Guess I should probably make fixes when I'm at home and not during lunch at school;) Cyclonebiskit (talk) 15:44, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
If the timeline image is a bug, then for now, it is an unactionable issue, so I will support because the other issues were resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:30, 8 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

SupportJason Rees (talk) 02:59, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Very detailed, and would make a fine addition to the 2003 AHS series. --Dylan620 (Home • yadda yadda yadda • Ooooohh!) 17:22, 9 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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