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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Dabomb87 23:04, 20 July 2010 [1].

Paolo Nutini discography

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Nominator(s): Mister sparky (talk) 16:39, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I have done alot of work on improvements lately and believe it is comprehensive and of high quality. There has also been a peer review and its suggestions actioned. Mister sparky (talk) 16:39, 30 June 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 22:20, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Never keen on "comprises of" - either just "comprises" or "consists of".
changed. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Irish Album Chart->Irish Albums Chart.
fixed. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Maybe say "the Dutch MegaCharts" rather than easter-egg-link the Netherlands.
changed to "Dutch Album Chart". Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead is a little light, you don't discuss the music videos at all for instance.
music video's are never mentioned in leads. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Well, perhaps they should, if they're included as part of the discography, why not talk about them? Particularly with such a short lead. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:05, 16 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
i've never seen them mentioned in any other discog and i don't see why they should be mentioned just because the lead is shorter than most. will find some other relevant info. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "biggest selling" hyphenate.
fixed. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Live and Acoustic EP has "Atlantic Records" as the label, all other instances of the same are referred to as simply "Atlantic".
forgot about that one! Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • One missing director, don't leave cells blank.
changed to "Unknown". Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 11 (Swiss charts) is also in German. Check the others please.
forgot about those. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • date/accessdate's are wrong way round, it should be YYYY-MM-DD, per the ISO.
every flc review has different views on those, some consistency would be nice. but changed. Mister sparky (talk) 13:31, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No, when writing dates out this way, there's just one view. YYYY-MM-DD per the ISO. Writing out in words, sure DMY or MDY depending on whether you prefer the British or American format, but for ISO, there's only one correct way. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:05, 16 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
what i meant was, some FLC's insist on dates in the refs being in ISO, some don't. but doesn't matter now. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 08:06, 15 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


the director can be sourced, but not reliably enough, will add a footnote. Mister sparky (talk) 13:16, 16 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 13:02, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Truco

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  • "Singles released from the album were; "Last Request", "Jenny Don't Be Hasty", "Rewind" and "New Shoes"." -- Should be a regular colon, not a semi.
fixed both occurences. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In May 2009 Nutini released his second album, Sunny Side Up, which debuted at number one in the UK and in Ireland." -- Comma after 2009
added. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • " It contained the singles; "Candy", "Coming Up Easy", "Pencil Full of Lead" and "10/10"." -- Colon not a semicolon.
fixed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • I feel the lead needs to be extended just a bit more, add something to not bore the reader. Right now all I read was a literal technical summary of the list, nothing really that informs the reader about the artist himself or his live tours that became albums, etc.
that's what the lead is supposed to do, summarise the contents of the article. general info about the artist himself is in the artists main page. can add more info about the live album and ep's. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Performed at the Live Earth concert, Wembley Stadium, London 7 July 2007" --> "Performed at the Live Earth concert at Wembley Stadium in London on 7 July 2007"
changed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • "These songs have not appeared on a studio album by Paolo Nutini." -- I think you can just refer to him by his last name here.
changed. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • For the 10/10 director, I recommend like in other FLC's to add a footnote explaining that a reliable reference has not been found to verify the director.
will add. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Under sales for the studio albums, I would place a centered emdash in the second entry; IMO its better to have something there than just an empty cell.
added. Mister sparky (talk) 17:36, 17 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- Issues resolved; meets WP:WIAFL.
thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 16:06, 18 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]
thank you! :) Mister sparky (talk) 21:30, 20 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]


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