Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Neftchi Baku PFC in European football/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 07:33, 18 September 2012 [1].

Neftchi Baku PFC in European football

Nominator(s): --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 11:48, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list as I believe, that after quite some work, it's ready for FL Status. --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 11:48, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose - not ready for FLC.

Lead is too short per WP:LEAD.
Lead bold links incorrect per WP:CONTEXTLINK.
References need to be correctly and comprehensively formatted.
Whole article is referenced to "wildstat.com", is that a reliable source? Links don't even work for me.
Basic issues like you have Q1 in the key and 1Q in the table.

Overall, just feels really lightweight, there's no analysis of any of their major games, look at Liverpool F.C. in European football for instance. And note that's a featured article, not list. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:31, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose per The Rambling Man. Article is in need of expanding. And, if enough information can be added, it may work better as an FAC. Also create a talk page for this. TBran dl ey 20:01, 3 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Thank you for your attention. Some information has been added. Example FL: Rosenborg BK in European football. --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 07:04, 4 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Why is the title repeated in bold before the first paragraph?
Much of the lead is written in quite poor English, the second half should read as follows:

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Neftchi Baku PFC's biggest win in Europe is a 3–0 victory over FC Zestafoni in the 2012–13 UEFA Champions League.

In 2012, Neftchi Baku became the first Azerbaijani team to advance to the group stage of a European competition. The club has an excellent European cup record, having not lost at home since the 1999–2000 season. Neftchi Baku's home games are usually played at the Tofiq Bahramov Stadium in Baku. The stadium was built by German prisoners of war in 1951 and constructed in the shape of the letter C to honour Stalin (Cyrillic: Cтaлин), however it was renamed after famous football referee Tofiq Bahramov in 1993 after his death. The stadium also serves as the home ground of the Azerbaijan national football team and holds 30,000 spectators making it the largest stadium in the country. In 2011, Neftchi's domestic games moved to the Ismat Gayibov Stadium.

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Also, there are three paragraphs in the lead which are each a single sentence
And what's with the ticks and crosses in the table?

Hope this helps -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:21, 5 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your help. --►Safir yüzüklü Cekli^mesaj 08:08, 18 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – On a brief glance, I see stubby paragraphs in the lead, MoS violations (refs before punctuation), a usage of check marks in the table that I haven't seen before, and many references missing information (publishers and access dates). This still needs a lot of work, and if that work isn't done I'd be inclined to close this FLC. Giants2008 (Talk) 19:11, 11 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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