Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/National Film Award for Best Supporting Actor/archive2
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National Film Award for Best Supporting Actor (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
- Featured list candidates/National Film Award for Best Supporting Actor/archive1
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- Nominator(s): FrankBoy CHITCHAT 13:19, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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Krimuk90, Vensatry, Skr15081997, Birdienest81 | |
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The Rambling Man | |
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The National Film Award for Best Supporting Actor was nominated for the FLC; however, the list failed because of not having enough comments and supports. I am looking forward to comments on how to improve it. -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 13:19, 20 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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—Vensatry (ping) 11:29, 21 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support – Looks good to me —Vensatry (ping) 18:43, 26 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm much grateful for the support. :) -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 18:47, 26 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Krimuk90
- You mention that the DFF has been set up by an Indian ministry, yet you in the very sentence you refer to the organisation as " the Indian government's DFF ". Redundant.
- In the first paragraph you mention that the award is presented by the DFF, yet you repeat the information at the beginning of in the second paragraph :"The Directorate of Film Festivals instituted the "Best Supporting Actor" category"
- "The award ceremony is held in New Delhi, India, where the award is presented by the President of India" ==> "The award is presented by the President of India at a ceremony held in New Delhi"
- Prose is quite repetitive in the third paragraph. I spot four sentences beginning with "XXX won..."
- In note d, do you mean unnamed or unknown?
- Why is the location information only present in ref no. 2? --Krimuk|90 (talk) 09:58, 23 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you @Krimuk90: for the comments. I have performed the edit, have tweaked for a better prose, and have added the location information to the sources wherever available. -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 12:07, 23 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I would remove the location information for the two refs to maintain consistency. Other than that, this has my support. Well done. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 07:08, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Removed. Thank you for the support. --FrankBoy CHITCHAT 09:17, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- I would remove the location information for the two refs to maintain consistency. Other than that, this has my support. Well done. --Krimuk|90 (talk) 07:08, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Support on prose and list. Excellent work.--Skr15081997 (talk) 11:35, 25 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you very much. --FrankBoy CHITCHAT 09:46, 26 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Support: Although I would suggest to remove the red link for Nanba Nanba until you create the article.
- --Birdienest81 (talk) 17:54, 30 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- No such plans, therefore removed. And, tks. (: -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 18:20, 30 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- There are absolutely no problems with red links in FLs. —Vensatry (ping) 18:47, 30 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- No such plans, therefore removed. And, tks. (: -- FrankBoy CHITCHAT 18:20, 30 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 11:44, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply] |
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Otherwise a good piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:18, 11 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:34, 14 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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