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The list was promoted by SchroCat 11:57, 19 January 2015 [1].

Morgan Freeman on screen and stage edit

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Nominator(s): LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:57, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because he is one of the great actors of our generation and deserves to have a well written career history article. LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:57, 24 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man edit

Quick comments you've waited nearly a month for some interest....

  • " in The Pawnbroker (1964), and A Man Called Adam (1966)." no need for the comma.
  • Any reason why the image captions avoid mentioning the subject matter?
    • I was told on another peer review/fl candidates comment that his last name isn't necessary since the article is about his career so it'd be redundant. I can add it back if you'd like. LADY LOTUS • TALK 13:12, 22 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he was on the television series" he was "on"? Reads weird to me, why not, "he acted/featured in"?
  • What sort of show was The Electric Company? It may help us to understand the "various characters" you go on to discuss.
  • " earned him second Academy Award nomination for Best Actor, the first for " seems odd to do this in reverse order.
  • "he was cast in the films" he appeared in more than those you listed, so perhaps it should be "in films, including..."
  • No need to link God.
  • "he was in the science fiction action films" grim writing, need to fix it up a little.
  • "The Pawnbroaker"? typo.
  • Gone, Baby, Gone has no commas.
  • Sortable tables mean linked items should be linked every time.
  • This is a predominantly USEng article, why are dates in the references in BritEng?
    •  Done - changed dates to mm, dd, yyyy format. LADY LOTUS • TALK 13:12, 22 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 21:58, 20 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: were all the suggestions you gave completed? Or do you have more? LADY LOTUS • TALK 14:48, 13 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cowlibob edit

Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 18:56, 14 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
References check of film section
  • Echo the comment above, dates should be m/d/y as he's American.
  • Include publishers for each work in the refs
  • Ref 5 (Pawnbroker credit) is sourced to a review which itself references IMDb so alternative needed.
  • Ref 6 says "A Man called Adam" is his screen debut but the table disagrees, which is correct?
    • It says "His first film roles were as uncredited characters in The Pawnbroker (1964) and A Man Called Adam (1966)." and in the table is has The Pawnbroker and A Man Called Adam as his first film roles, so I'm kinda confused lol LADY LOTUS • TALK
  • Ref 7 is sourced from "6th floor blog" on NYT, are they reliable?
    • I consider them to be reliable coming from the New York Times. If you don't consider them to be, let me know LADY LOTUS • TALK
  • Ref 8 supports that he appeared in those films but not for the role he played in all of them and also whether he directed Bopha!
  • Ref 9 again supports he appeared in those films but not the role he played in all of them.
  • Ref 12 doesn't support the role he played in Street Smart and anyway we could probably do better than a magazine for a hotel chain.
  • Ref 17 supports he played a brigadier general in Outbreak but not what he's named. Also doesn't support that he played Red in Shawshank.
  • Ref 18 says he played "Shannon" in Chain Reaction not "Paul Shannon"
  • Ref 23 says he plays "Colonel Kurtz" but the role he played was Colonel Abraham Curtis as it says in the table. Use this one instead: [[2]]
  • Ref 25 doesn't support the name of his role.
  • Ref 28 doesn't support he played Lucius Fox in Batman Begins
  • Ref 30 doesn't support that he voiced Neil Armstrong
  • Ref 31 doesn't support the name of his role
  • Ref 38 says he was involved in the events of the doc but not that he appeared in it.
  • Ref 39 doesn't support the name of his role
  • Ref 43 doesn't support the name of his role
  • Ref 44 doesn't support full name of his role just the Beech part
  • Ref 48 doesn't support the name of his role
  • Ref 49 doesn't support the name of his role
    • "With the help of Dr. Cameron McCarthy (Freeman), who developed a unique prosthetic tail for the injured dolphin, they were able to save her life." LADY LOTUS • TALK
  • Ref 51 doesn't support the name of his role

 Done LADY LOTUS • TALK

  • Ref 53 doesn't support the name of his role

 Done LADY LOTUS • TALK

I'm going to wait till you sort these out to continue on to the other sections. Cowlibob (talk) 17:04, 21 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Cowlibob: in regard to the comments about the references not supporting the name of his role, I've honestly never had to do that before, I was never told that was a prereq. for FL, so I'm just asking if that's necessary. If it is, I can go back through and find references to support it but it might be kind of hard. Just let me know! :) LADY LOTUS • TALK 13:42, 30 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
@Lady Lotus: It's a good habit to get into of giving as much info of ref so publishers would be helpful and other reviewers have asked me to provide publishers in previous FLCs. I apologise if I didn't highlight the need in previous FLCs for roles played in films to be verifiable but they really should be. Film reviews are good for that as they confirm appearance and often the role played. Try and find refs that confirm the whole name of the character if possible. I found a ref for his film debut in Pawnbroker [[3]] to replace ref 5. This book ref confirms A Man Called Adam was his second appearance. [[4]], you can replace ref 6 with this. The confusion I wanted to fix was that in the lifetime bio it says "man called adam" is his first film role which isn't true as the Pawnbroker was before that. Also I see in the stage section you've just put venue as Broadway for some (which is just a location where lots of theaters are found like the West End), try to find which theater the plays were performed in. Cowlibob (talk) 11:15, 31 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
@Cowlibob: roger that, I will work on references today. Thank you :) LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:07, 31 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]
@Cowlibob: ok, references should be fixed. Want to recheck and let me know? Also, I added publishers but what happens when the publisher is the same as the 'work'? Like Rolling Stone and Los Angeles Times? Work is for published entities but they are also the publisher. LADY LOTUS • TALK 14:55, 5 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Lady Lotus: Much better in terms of refs now. 2nd ref check again point out if I made a mistake.
  • Use the book ref I suggested above for his role in "A man called adam".
  • publisher for those can be the named publisher: Rolling Stone (Jann Wenner), Los Angeles Times (Austin Beutner).
  • Teachers ref only says his character role as "Lewis" not Al Lewis.
  • Ref 13 only supports "Charlie" not "Charlie Woods".
  • Ref 16 only supports "Rawlins" not "Sgt. Mj. John".
  • Use this ref for Lean on Me [[5]] and no need to pipe it just call him "Joe Louis Clark".
  • Ref 19 only supports "Lt. Drones" not A. Z.
  • Ref 20 only supports "Judge White" not Leonard
  • Ref 27 only supports "Brigadier General" not Billy Ford
  • Ref 28 only supports "Detective Somerset" not Detective Lt. William Somerset
  • Use this ref for Chain Reaction [[6]] supports full name of Paul Shannon.
  • Remove the piping of Theodore Joadson to the film article.
  • Deep Impact role was Tim Beck not Tom Beck
  • Ref 35 supports "Charlie" not "Charlie Quinn"
  • Ref 32 doesn't support that he exec produced Along Came a Spider
  • Ref 44 goes to 404.
  • Ref 46 only supports "Mitch" not Mitch Bradley
  • Ref 48 doesn't support his role in Batman Begins as Lucius Fox
@Lady Lotus: My mistake. Cowlibob (talk) 21:52, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 50 doesn't support that he voiced Armstrong
  • Fix ref 60 formatting as accessdate needs a
@Lady Lotus: Right, sourcing seems to be pretty much sorted except for the Earth Day Special which you can exclude if you want if you can't find an RS. I've done some reworking of the lead as I find that you share my tendency in making the prose of the lead very listy which doesn't really work in making "an engaging lead". So I've tried to reword it to be more like a story of his career rather than bullet points. It probably still needs a bit more work but hopefully looks better now. Cowlibob (talk) 18:56, 14 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks so much. I removed the Earth Day special, maybe a RS will come along one day :) Is there anything else you find that needs to be fixed before you support it? LADY LOTUS • TALK 19:02, 14 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Lady Lotus: It's close I'll have a look at what I can do with the lead. Just needs some tweaking, I'll try to have a good look at it tomorrow. Cowlibob (talk) 19:14, 14 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Lady Lotus: Ok I think that does it. Happy to support now, good work! Cowlibob (talk) 22:54, 17 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you SO much!!! LADY LOTUS • TALK 20:51, 18 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dr. Blofeld edit

Support Looks in good shape. I'm sure you'll complete Cow's points. One thing though you might change the web source authors with surname first like the books for consistency.♦ Dr. Blofeld 13:09, 31 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Dr. Blofeld: Thank you :) I made the book cites [firstname lastname] for consistency just because there were fewer of them as opposed to changing all the web cites. Hope that's ok. LADY LOTUS • TALK 14:48, 13 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from SNUGGUMS edit

Resolved comments from Snuggums (talk / edits)
Looks quite nice :). I don't have many concerns, though Freeman starring in the Broadway adaptation of Driving Miss Daisy should be added. It's also worth mentioning he won a Golden Globe for Best Actor in Driving Miss Daisy and a nomination for Best Supporting Actor in Street Smart since Academy Award nominations and the Academy Award he won are listed. Also, "earned him his third Academy Award nomination, this one for Best Actor" → "earned him his third Academy Award nomination for Best Actor". For the future, yes- references DO need to support names of roles. Can't see any other issues. Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:43, 5 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks and both are added :) LADY LOTUS • TALK 15:08, 5 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
You're quite welcome, I now support :D (sorry for the delay) Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:28, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, thanks so much :) LADY LOTUS • TALK 12:22, 7 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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