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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 04:56, 22 February 2019 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Mexican National Mini-Estrella Championship edit

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I am nominating this for featured list because it follows all the pro wrestling list guidelines as well as the FL guidelines. Format, details etc. all match the Featured Lists I have created in the past. Supplied sources and quotes from offline sources, translations of foreign language sources etc. MPJ-DK (talk) 19:21, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • "A "Mini" is not necessarily a person with dwarfism, as in North American Midget wrestling; it can also be very short wrestlers who work in the Mini-Estrellas division" - this doesn't quite seem grammatically correct to me. I would say "A "Mini" is not necessarily a person with dwarfism, as in North American Midget wrestling; wrestlers who do not have dwarfism but are very short also work in the Mini-Estrellas division"
    • "All title matches take place"- past tense for inactive title?
    • "Afterward, AAA replaced" - given the date at the end of the sentence, the first word is redundant
    • The sequence of the lead seems really odd. I would move the entire third paragraph before the second, removing the first sentence of the latter as this simply duplicates the last sentence of what will now be the preceding paragraph (hope that makes sense). I also don't think you need to state twice that Espectrito was the first champion.
    • "when Peña created AAA" - who is Pena? Not mentioned before or anywhere else.
  • Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:22, 6 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I was struggling with how to word the sentence on the Mini Estrellas, thank you for your help on that. I have move stuff around and hopefully addressed all your other concerns? MPJ-DK (talk) 21:51, 6 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - all looks OK now -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:31, 7 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments by LM2000
    • All recommendations involve the lede:
    • Link dwarfism.
    • Link midget wrestling and make the M lower case.
    • First mention of AAA be spelled out to Asistencia Asesoría y Administración (AAA)
    • First mention of CMLL should be spelled out to Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (CMLL) and linked. It is spelled out and linked further in intro but not at its first mention.LM2000 (talk) 11:14, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      • LM2000 - I believe I have addressed all issues, as well as removed a category that did not belong on the page. MPJ-DK (talk) 12:30, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • I fixed a linking error. Looks good now, Support.LM2000 (talk) 14:18, 8 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments by ImmortalWizard
    • "The Mexican National Mini-Estrella Championship (Campeonato Nacional Mini-Estrella in Spanish). or..." why full stop?
    • I feel like the "Event" column is not required since all of them are the same; it can be noted somewhere instead. Also if you decide to keep it, "Live event" could only wikilinked on first instance.
    • "The championship was introduced in January 1993,[l],.." why two commas? ImmortalWizard(chat) 11:53, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for your comments, appreciate it. I have fixed the punctuation issues. As for event, it's part of the standard format for wrestling championships. I will do some research to see if there are more specfic show names to be used to make the article better. MPJ-DK (talk) 14:25, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Found, added and sources show names. ImmortalWizard MPJ-DK (talk) 15:31, 19 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
ImmortalWizard I believe I have addressed your concerns, does the nomination have your support or are there sill concerns? MPJ-DK (talk) 23:37, 9 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 21:52, 20 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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