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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 03:26:46 27 November 2019 (UTC) [1].

Lorenzo Bandini Trophy edit

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Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 08:12, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This list concerns the Lorenzo Bandini Trophy, one of the most famous and prestigious awards in the world of motor racing. I have recently redone the list and I believe that it meets the necessary criteria to be a featured list. MWright96 (talk) 08:12, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • That first sentence is epic in its length - any chance you could break it up?
  • "12 judges, which is composed" - don't think the words "which is" are needed
  • "determine the recipient of the award" - the subject of the verb is "panel", which is singular, so it should be "determines the recipient of the award"
  • The second table is headed "Winners by nation represented", but my understanding (not being a fan myself) is that in F1, drivers don't "represent" a nation in the way they do in, say, international football. Maybe change to just "Winners by nationality"?
  • Any reason why the country names aren't written in full?
  • Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:53, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:56, 15 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

  • The title List of winners could be shortened to just Winners, as the content here is obviously a list.
  • Ref 20 looks questionable to me in terms of reliability, as it is self-evidently a blog. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:17, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Not so sure. It lists an editorial staff per [2]. Nevertheless, have replaced it to be safe. MWright96 (talk) 05:44, 17 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Giants2008: Have addressed the concerns raised. MWright96 (talk) 05:44, 17 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support – Everything looks good after the changes. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:08, 17 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Teratix edit

  • Named after the Italian driver Lorenzo Bandini, who died three days after suffering severe burns in a major accident at the 1967 Monaco Grand Prix, the accolade's trophy, a ceramic replica of Bandini's Ferrari 312/67 adorned with the number 18, is usually awarded to an individual or team for "a commendable performance in motorsport", on the basis on how the success was achieved rather than the results attained, and their character and approach to racing. Too long. Split this into one sentence focusing on Bandini and one focusing on who the trophy is awarded to.
  • The 2019 winner of the Lorenzo Bandini Trophy just say "2019 winner".
  • Refs -> Ref. ({{abbr|Ref.|Reference}}) (there's only one reference per row)
  • Otherwise it all looks good, and it's a shame it's sat around here so long. – Teratix ₵ 05:40, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Teratix: Thank you for taking the time to review. Have made all of the changes requested. MWright96 (talk) 06:31, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]
      • Just two things I noticed on further review:
        • usually awarded to an individual or team since you already mentioned this in the first sentence, just cut "to an individual or team".
        • on the basis on change to "based on" – Teratix ₵ 10:30, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed (made some formatting tweaks), promoting. --PresN 03:26, 27 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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