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List of songs written by Marius Moga

Featured list candidates/List of songs written by Marius Moga/archive1

Nominator(s): Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:29, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

After bringing a similar list to FL, List of songs written by Alexandru Cotoi, I am nominating this list as well. I've taken note of all the comments from it although, this list is lengthier. Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:29, 9 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pamzeis

Hopefully not gonna screw this up

"Moga contributed to all tracks on the album, with its lead single, "Ți-am promis", peaking at number five on the Romanian Top 100." — the lack of relation or relatedness or whatever it is between the first (from Moga to album) and second (from with to 100) parts of this... portion make it kinda confusing. I feel like a hypocrite because the way I phrased my comment seems really hard to understand.
- Removed the bit about the peak position and reworded the sentence. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"released three albums, Reverse, Mind Fields and N3XT, the latter including" — the commas are sorta ambiguous as its possible that "Reverse, Mind Fields and N3XT" could either be the three albums or something else being listed alongside the albums
- Fixed the commas per MOS:SERIAL, I hope it makes sense now. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Optional but septuple seems like a rather uncommon word; perhaps replace it with seven-time?
- Replaced septuple with seven-time. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Some of the commercially successful songs which reached the summit on the Romanian music charts that were co-written by him" — kinda clunky and awkward...
- Rewrote that entire part. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"He had several attempts at" — ...were these successful or unsucccessful?
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pamzeis (talk) 11:00, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Pamzeis: thanks for reviewing the lead, I've addressed all your comments. Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:36, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. One last comment: for any names of albums or things that would normally be italicised, they should be italicised in citations as well per MOS:CONFORMTITLE. Pamzeis (talk) 15:29, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, fixed the citations as well. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:33, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"The album, [...] to which Moga contributed entirely" - what does this mean?
- He wrote every song on it. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  - Then write "for which he wrote every song". What is there at the moment does not make sense in English -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:14, 15 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
    Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 15 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"was released in January 2002 and receive a platinum certification later that year by the" => "was released in January 2002 and received a platinum certification later that year from the"
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"their third album was certified platinum and four times platinum in Russia" - both platinum and four-times platinum?
- Rewrote the entire sentence, hopefully it makes sense now. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"which reached number one the Airplay 100 chart" => "which reached number one on the Airplay 100 chart"
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Notes b and d should not have full stops as they are not complete sentences -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:51, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: thanks for reviewing, I've addressed your comments. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:48, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:19, 16 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TRM

Is he really a singer-songwriter?
- I'm confused by this as I said "singer, songwriter", I didn't hyphenate the two. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"other singers as well.[" "as well" not really needed.
- Removed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"He began earning money by..." this sentence goes on a bit, maybe split.
- Split. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"when Akcent's" who or what is that?
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"platinum certification" link appropriate "certification" article.
- Linked to Music recording certification. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Their first and third albums were ..." this is interesting but the article is about the songs, not the albums.
- Removed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"topped the Airplay 100" is there an article for Airplay 100?
- There is Romanian record charts which contains information about all Romanian music charts. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Why does 2Night sort before 0721?
- Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Not sure on the comprehensiveness of sourcing for, say, the "unknown" dates, e.g. I clicked on ref 43 for "Adderall" and saw no mention of "Ross Golan" but there was "Golan Ross Jacob", why is the name being tinkered with?
- Repertoires list the surname first and then the first name (and then middle name if any). I believe that adding the middle names will make the list look clunky and that would be too much detail (eg: Samantha Castel from ref 58 has 4 first names). Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Plenty of spaced hyphens in the ref titles, should be en-dashes.
- I hope I replaced all. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's it for me for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:56, 22 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for reviewing, I've addressed your comments. Sebbirrrr (talk) 23:21, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Z1720

No concerns with the lede
Image check: pass
Source check: Version reviewed
- Lots of the citations have an id parameter, but the identifier is not included so I do not know what organisation this is for. Take a look at Template:Cite_AV_media_notes#Identifiers to determine how to add identifiers to the citations.

Those are my thoughts. Let me know when the identifiers above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 14:45, 5 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: Thanks for reviewing. All the codes were meant to be found via Universal Product Code. Let me know if it looks okay. Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:20, 5 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. My concerns were addressed and I have no further comments. Z1720 (talk) 18:44, 5 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --Pres N 19:21, 13 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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