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List of songs recorded by Regine Velasquez

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Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 09:39, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I've been working on this list beginning of January 2018 on the songs recorded by Filipino singer Regine Velasquez, listing down notable songs/singles that span her 31-year career. It has undergone a GOCE copy-edit for the lead section. Constructive criticism, in any form and from anyone, will be appreciated. Cheers! Pseud 14 (talk) 09:39, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from BeatlesLedTV

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Resolved comments from BeatlesLedTV (talk) 19:21, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments from BeatlesLedTV
  • Make sure songs and albums are not sorted by definite articles "The, A, An," etc. per WP:Sorting (make sure the three that begin with "A" are moved to the correct spots alphabetically)
    • Fixed and sorted accordingly
  • There isn't an end quote for "Written in the Sand"
    • Fixed
  • Every image needs alt text (aside from Velasquez's that already has it)
    • Alt text added to all images
  • Add scope rows to the key, specifically the colored boxes (if you're confused or have questions just ask)
    • Done (do let me know if I did it correctly)
  • Change the song table heading to something like "Name of song, credited artist(s), writer(s), original release, and year of release"
    • Done (titled headings as: Song name, Credited artist(s), Writer(s), Original release, and Year of release)
  • Is it necessary to have songs like "Sometime, Somewhere" and "Tuwing Umuulan (At Kapiling Ka)" listed twice? I see that she has recorded many songs with the same titles but have different writers. These two in particular have the same writer, Ryan Cayabyab. You think it'd be better to include the version released at a later date in a note saying she rerecorded and was released on ____?
    • Agreed! I made the necessary changes as suggested. (with the exception of Fallin', same song title but in fact different writers as one is a Filipino composition and the other is an international song)
  • Make sure in the lead, the instance mid-sentence of "The Beatles" → "the Beatles" per MOS:THEMUSIC as well as per a RfC discussion and a RfM discussion (specifically for them)
    • Fixed
  • Comma after ""I'll Never Love This Way Again" by Dionne Warwick"
    • Done

That's all I got. Great job on this! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 19:32, 27 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

BeatlesLedTV, thanks very much for your valuable input. I have addressed those things as mentioned in my comments. Look forward to any additional comments as you find fit. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 06:29, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • I found something else. Per WP:Sorting, names are to be sorted by last name and not first, which is how it is currently sorted for the artist col. Honestly, unless you wanna do all the coding for that, I would just unsorted that col. Or you could check out WP:NAMESORT and do something like the default sort key (which I actually never knew about until now). Whatever you prefer. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 07:43, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • BeatlesLedTV, thanks for the quick note. I did go over the artist col and from what I see, they are sorted per last name (with the exception of artists professionally known by first name i.e. Jaya). I did however sort everything credited as "Regine Velasquez with/featuring -- (artist) under "Velasquez" while "(Artist) with/featuring Regine Velasquez" under that specific artist's last name. Let me know if what I'm seeing is correct (unless I'm seeing differently from what you noted) :) Look forward to your feedback. --Pseud 14 (talk) 08:09, 28 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]
BeatlesLedTV, Thank you --Pseud 14 (talk) 13:13, 31 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Ceranthor

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  • "Filipino singer Regine Velasquez has recorded material for seventeen studio albums, nine soundtrack albums and five extended plays (EP), and has collaborated with other artists on duets and featured songs on their respective albums." - seems like it could be split into two sentences
  • "including "I Don't Want to Miss a Thing" by Aerosmith, "The Long and Winding Road" by the Beatles, "I'll Never Love This Way Again" by Dionne Warwick, and "Music and Me" by Michael Jackson.[15] " - you haven't been using the serial comma elsewhere, so don't use it here

Otherwise, prose looks good to me. ceranthor 15:18, 9 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Ceranthor, thanks for your comments. The above have been addressed. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 10:12, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
I feel comfortable supporting this, then. ceranthor 14:28, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you Ceranthor, much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 11:32, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from FrB.TG

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Support
  • "The lead single "Fly" was released—the only original song on the record" - suggest moving "the only original song on the record" between Fly and was.
  • Done
  • "A cover album, it contained covers of international singles" - cover ... cover.
  • Fixed.
  • "The album has since been certified twelve-times" - not sure hyphen is needed here.
  • Removed
  • "She worked with producer Tats Faustino, who wrote "Dadalhin", and collaborated with singer Janno Gibbs, who wrote the ballad "Sa Aking Pag-iisa"." - who wrote ... who wrote. Repetitive.
  • Fixed
  • "In addition to her studio work, Velasquez has recorded songs for her films' soundtracks" - what do you mean "her films"? Has she starred in them? If so, that should be clarified since there is nothing here talking about her film work.
  • Clarified and reworded.

Nothing major to detract me from supporting. FrB.TG (talk) 21:16, 12 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

FrB.TG, thank you for your comments. I have addressed them as mentioned above. Much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 11:32, 13 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Cartoon network freak

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Hi there Pseud 14! I really apologize for this coming so late, but I really didn't find time for this earlier. I really appreciate what you've done with the article and found no significant issues apart for some tweaks I've done in the lead [2] to improve the language and flow of the text (feel free to undo things if you feel I've done something wrong...). The table and the refs also seem to be on point. All in all, this is a clear support from me! Best regards and good luck; Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:06, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Cartoon network freak! Much appreciate your support. Cheers! --Pseud 14 (talk) 07:57, 7 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 15:27, 12 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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