Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of senators in the 14th Parliament of Pakistan/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was archived by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 23:31, 18 December 2016 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of senators in the 14th Parliament of Pakistan edit

Featured list candidates/List of senators in the 14th Parliament of Pakistan/archive1

Nominator(s): Saqib (talk) 15:28, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it meets all of the FL criteria and so has great potential to become a Featured List. it is one of the most important lists in the scope of WikiProject Pakistan, is up to date and is well referenced. Saqib (talk) 15:28, 5 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comment by Dudley

The lead is ungrammatical and unclear. I can have a go at a redraft if you wish. Dudley Miles (talk) 12:57, 28 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Oppose poorly written lead, poorly formed citations (about fifty or so have the same title!). Needs real work before it's a shout for a candidate here. The Rambling Man (talk) 22:19, 4 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been archived, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:31, 18 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.