Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international goals scored by Phil Younghusband/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 30 January 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of international goals scored by Phil Younghusband edit
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- Nominator(s): Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 06:21, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe that it fits the featured list criteria and that it is similar in quality to other featured lists such as List of international goals scored by Sunil Chhetri and List of international goals scored by Miroslav Klose. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 06:21, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:29, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:29, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Kosack (talk) 21:22, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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A few points from a first run through. Kosack (talk) 19:17, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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- Comments by WA8MTWAYC
- "He is also the most capped player for the Philippines" this is the third time in as many sentences you've written "the Philippines". I would write something like "for the country" to have some variation.
- "50 of Younghusband's international goals" avoid starting a sentence with a digit per MOS:NUM.
- Some refs are missing their publication dates: refs 2, 5, 8, 11, 28, 29, 31, 37, 38, 39.
- Equally, two refs are missing their retrieval dates: refs 10 and 42.
- What makes "globalsportsarchive.com" a reliable source? WA8MTWAYC (talk) 10:35, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @WA8MTWAYC: I believe I addressed your concerns. The only reason I used globalsportsarchive was because I couldn't find anything online about that match. It turns out though that Google News Archive has the Philippine Daily Inquirer, so I replaced it with that. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 19:59, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from MWright96 (talk) 13:31, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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Support -- MWright96 (talk) 13:31, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from HAL333 23:17, 26 December 2020 (UTC)[reply] |
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Everything else looks great.HAL333 19:54, 26 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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- "with the national team ... for the team" repetitive.
- What makes Rappler a RS?
- It's considered generally reliable per WP:RS/PS.
- "His 12th international goal was" feels really odd talking about this before his debut/first goal are mentioned.
- Yeah, it's out of order chronologically, but I felt it was a good place in terms of narrative.
- (AMAZING fact about his nationality being discovered by a gamer!!)
- I see ESPN saying In 2018, Younghusband used his right foot to lift the Philippine Azkals into its most prestigious tournament in its history so I would assume this should be worth covering here?
- Good idea. Would make it easier to move the Miracle of Hanoi mention while keeping a good narrative.
- Worth noting that he retired age 32 and why (if possible) as that's young...
- Reference should be Reference(s).
- For aesthetics, normally the refs are centrally aligned in the table.
- I can't figure out how to do this. It seems like it should be simple, but I can't find anything on applying a style to entire columns. I can only find how to do it to entire rows. Also, all the other "List of international goals..." featured list refs are left aligned. It's just hard to tell sometimes because they only use one ref per row.
- Since I recently had to figure this out for my nomination for List of international goals scored by Manon Melis, I welcomed the opportunity to apply my new-found knowledge, and just did this. Edwininlondon (talk) 09:37, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Omg that looked like it took a bunch of work. Thank you so much! Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 23:37, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Since I recently had to figure this out for my nomination for List of international goals scored by Manon Melis, I welcomed the opportunity to apply my new-found knowledge, and just did this. Edwininlondon (talk) 09:37, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I can't figure out how to do this. It seems like it should be simple, but I can't find anything on applying a style to entire columns. I can only find how to do it to entire rows. Also, all the other "List of international goals..." featured list refs are left aligned. It's just hard to tell sometimes because they only use one ref per row.
- "beat Laos 4-1" should be an en-dash.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 16:55, 1 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The Rambling Man, I left some comments above. If I didn't leave a comment, that means I'm for sure gonna get working on that sometime this week. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 18:57, 1 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Ok, The Rambling Man, let me know what you think. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 00:43, 4 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review
- Source #8 checks out the main list of goals
- #8 has game 2 as an ASEAN Games Qualifier instead of a 2007 AFF Championship qualification, which I assume are the same, do you know?
- others I checked are all fine: #2, #3, #4, #26, #27, #28, #29, #30, #31, #32, #33, #34
- In terms of reliability of sources: I was unfamiliar with quite a few, such as Rappler, but they all seem ok.
Edwininlondon (talk) 16:50, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Yeah, AFF stands for ASEAN Football Federation. It has changed names a couple of times throughout the years, so I think that website just uses "ASEAN Games" to keep it consistent. Rappler is considered reliable per WP:RSP. As an aside, you should watch A Thousand Cuts. It's a documentary about Rappler's editor-in-chief, Maria Ressa, and her battle against Rodrigo Duterte's efforts to silence journalists. Bait30 Talk 2 me pls? 23:48, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the explanation. I will look that documentary up, sounds interesting. Based on prose and source review, I Support this nomination. Edwininlondon (talk) 06:58, 25 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 04:37, 29 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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