Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of international cricket centuries by Virender Sehwag/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Matthewedwards 01:50, 24 August 2009 [1].
- Nominator(s): Abeer.ag (talk) 13:38, 5 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I am nominating this for featured list because it is comprhensive, and meets WP:FLC. Abeer.ag (talk) 13:38, 5 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Diaa
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Thank You for your comments. Abeer.ag (talk) 06:19, 13 August 2009 (UTC)[reply] |
Support, final comment is that the first paragraph in the lead is only two sentences, could u expand to three or four sentences for style purposes?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 06:36, 13 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- There isn't any general content left to add (only test n odi specific). btw, just below this comnt an itch was noted, consecutive lines begin with "He, His". Hometech (talk) 19:41, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
- Space needed after reference 5.
- Done.
- Remove the spaces around the dash in the second paragraph.
- Done.
- Many sentences start with "He" or "His". Is it possible to change a few to provide for a more engaging lead? Even using his last name would be better.
- Hmm.. I tried to do it but failed miserably. Any suggestions?
- Done Hometech (talk) 05:59, 16 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Hmm.. I tried to do it but failed miserably. Any suggestions?
- Lots of whitespace between the second and third paragraphs.
- How do I fix that?
- Done Hometech (talk) 05:59, 16 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- How do I fix that?
- Photo in the lead needs spaces after commas in the alt text, which also has a typo: "backgrounf."
- Done
- Photo of Queens Park Oval: Comma after Port of Spain in caption. Alt text reads: "A stadium with a people playing...". Remove second "a".
- Done
- What makes http://www.cricbuzz.com/ a reliable source?
- Replaced
- Bullet needed before the external link. Giants2008 (17–14) 00:23, 13 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Done
Thank you for your comments. Abeer.ag (talk) 06:19, 13 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) Much improved from the last such list submitted here.
- "but is yet to score a century in a Twenty20 international." Then why mention it?
- There are three major formats in cricket: Test, ODI and T20.Just to be thorough, I mentioned it.
- "Out of these centuries" "out" is an unnecessary word.
- Changed
- Can you put "Key" in bold?
- Done
- "The innings in the Test match." No period at the end.
- Changed
- "Remained not out." Remove period at the end.
- Changed
- "The Queen's Park Oval in the Port of Spain where Sehwag made a century in the 2007 World Cup" Comma after "Spain".
- Changed
- There's probably a good reason for this but why don't you list strike rate for Test?
- SRs are somewhat irrelevant in Test, since matches last five days and the rate of scoring isn't that important.
- ODI centuries, No. 2 – Date should be September 22, 2002, not
- Changed
- ODI centuries, No. 10 – strike rate should be 128.8, not 121.8
- Changed
- List all strike rates with two decimal places. If it is rounded to the tenths place, add a trailing 0 to the end.
- Done
- Is there a ref for footnote 7?
- Ref 8.
- It looks uncited as is, though. Suggest putting it in a separate section and inline citing it. Dabomb87 (talk) 23:28, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref 8.
Dabomb87 (talk) 02:54, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:54, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank You for your comments. Abeer.ag (talk) 06:46, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Note FLC is currently short of reviewers; please consider reviewing one or more on the nomination list if you have not already (this message is being posted to all running FLCs). Dabomb87 (talk) 23:22, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Wouldn't it be better to create a list of achievements by Virender Sehwag and have a section there for centuries? Something like a basketball-related List of career achievements by Kobe Bryant or a golf-related List of career achievements by Jack Nicklaus. I am sure there are other cricket records that Virender Sehwag is a part of. Why can't we put all records in one page?--Crzycheetah 03:06, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- What other records are possible in cricket? Golf or baskt exampls are pointless. Hometech (talk) 12:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The only other significant achievements for batsman would be Man of the Match awards.. that list would be largely redundant, since most of his MoM awards would be in these games only. Abeer.ag (talk) 12:32, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- There's a lot of info in the "Achievements" section in his main article. It is usually discouraged to have lists in biographical articles, especially long tables; therefore, if a list of achievements by Virender Sehwag is created with all these centuries along with all that stuff in the Virender Sehwag#Achievements section, the main article will look a lot better.--Crzycheetah 16:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I've incorporated mos of the things in the "Records" section. The awards and man of the series lists are definitely notable enough to be in the main article. Abeer.ag (talk) 07:00, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I never said they're not notable. I am saying those tables are long and make that article look like a list; thus, they should be split off. List of career achievements by Virender Sehwag can contain these tables along with the tables in the List of international cricket centuries by Virender Seehwag. --Crzycheetah 01:18, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I've incorporated mos of the things in the "Records" section. The awards and man of the series lists are definitely notable enough to be in the main article. Abeer.ag (talk) 07:00, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- There's a lot of info in the "Achievements" section in his main article. It is usually discouraged to have lists in biographical articles, especially long tables; therefore, if a list of achievements by Virender Sehwag is created with all these centuries along with all that stuff in the Virender Sehwag#Achievements section, the main article will look a lot better.--Crzycheetah 16:25, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The only other significant achievements for batsman would be Man of the Match awards.. that list would be largely redundant, since most of his MoM awards would be in these games only. Abeer.ag (talk) 12:32, 17 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Article looks good to me just a few minor quibbles with the references.
- On Ref 13 the publisher is stats.cricinfo.com yet plenty of other refs with the prefix stats.cricinfo.com simply use Cricinfo as publisher, be consistent.
- Changed
- Ref 3 and ref 4 are similar but on 3 a mdash and colon are used, on 4 two ndashes, be consistent.
- Umm.. I don't understand. Could you please make the change.
- Done
- Umm.. I don't understand. Could you please make the change.
- I realise it is the headings on the window but placing Cricinfo Statsguru in the middle of the reference title seems slightly odd. Cricinfo is already the publisher so does it need repeating. Take ref 6 as an example and I'd prefer to see a more logical order of 'Statsguru - Test matches - Batting record - Double centuries by Indian openers'.
- Changed some- is this what you meant?
- Partly. I'd prefer to see the Statsguru part at the start like ref 16.
- Changed some- is this what you meant?
- As you use the date format of 'Month Date, Year' repeating that for the references would be better than YY-MM-DD.
- I believe there's a script that does this. Do you know where it is?
- I don't know anything about scripts, sorry.
- Fixed this. Dabomb87 (talk) 13:38, 21 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't know anything about scripts, sorry.
- I believe there's a script that does this. Do you know where it is?
- On the Ref 7 issue that Dabomb mentioned, is there even a need to mention Chappell and Samaraweera, if they were all level on two or three then I could understand it but Sehwag is ahead of them. You don't mention who's second in terms of fastest triple hundred so it seems slightly odd to have that ref.
- It just seemed interesting...
- Fair enough, I was just offering a solution to a outstanding issue which may be stopping Dabomb from supporting. --Jpeeling (talk) 09:21, 21 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- It just seemed interesting...
- Nothing to do with refs but on the fourth image you use vs. which looks a bit amateurish to me, change to versus or against.
- Done
--Jpeeling (talk) 22:40, 20 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your comments. Abeer.ag (talk) 07:06, 21 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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