Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of characters in Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance

List of characters in Fire Emblem: Path of Radiance edit

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page. No further edits should be made to this page. The closing editor's comments were: 11 days, 1 support, 3 oppose. List needs to include more out-of-universe information. Fail. Raime 22:00, 14 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

All concerns from here have been addressed. The article is comprehensive and well written. I believe that article doesn't fail to meet any of the criteria and thus should be promoted. Thank you. Ashnard _Talk ^Contribs 15:29, 3 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Support as nominator: Why not? Ashnard _Talk ^Contribs 15:30, 3 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose. The list consists mostly of plot details, written from an in-universe perspective. It needs to be rewritten following the guidelines in Wikipedia:Manual of Style (writing about fiction). I know that's not specifically an FLC criteria, but the MoS applies to all articles. Toohool 18:26, 3 October 2007 (UTC)][reply]
Oppose - almost entirely in-universe details. Needs to incorporate out-of-universe information. See List of Metal Gear Solid characters as a basis. Sephiroth BCR ^(Converse) 22:47, 3 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose - Sorry Ashnard, it just needs some more work. See the out of universe information here (yes, the list isn't completely out of universe yet), or in all the examples given above? That's what it needs. — Dihydrogen Monoxide (H₂O) 02:09, 5 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate the sentiment, Dihydrogen Monoxide, but I doubt I'll be resubmitting. I can barely find any out-of-universe information on this topic. Thank you. Ashnard _Talk ^Contribs 07:19, 5 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, it's pretty compact for a character list with so many members, so I give you kudos for that. A few issues/suggestions you'll want to deal with in any case: you need to bold your topic in first paragraph and drop the scrolling references, they cause serious accessibility issues. regarding the in/out balance, try writing the character from the angle of their impact on the "out-of-universe plot" (can't find a better formulation). Circeus 06:15, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]