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List of awards and nominations received by Brad Pitt edit

List of awards and nominations received by Brad Pitt (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Brad Pitt is an American actor and film producer. He was won various awards including two Academy Awards, two British Academy Film Awards, and three Golden Globe Awards. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:16, 6 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:59, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • "The next year, Pitt appeared in Terry Gilliam's science fiction Twelve Monkeys, he won the Golden Globe Award for Best Supporting Actor – Motion Picture[" => "The next year, Pitt appeared in Terry Gilliam's science fiction film Twelve Monkeys, for which he won the Golden Globe Award for Best Supporting Actor – Motion Picture"
  • "Pitt won Screen Actors Guild Award for Outstanding Performance by a Cast in a Motion Picture,[14] the film" => "Pitt won Screen Actors Guild Award for Outstanding Performance by a Cast in a Motion Picture,[14] and the film"
  • "He won Academy Award for Best Supporting Actor" => "He won the Academy Award for Best Supporting Actor"
  • The two films starting with 12 should sort under T for Twelve
  • A Mighty Heart should sort under M
  • All the films starting with T should sort under the next word
  • The same film is shown as both Mr and Mrs Smith and Mr. & Mrs. Smith
  • Think that's it from me - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:51, 6 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 15:38, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • In the 3rd paragraph, "biographical" is linked, but that word appears unlinked in the 2nd paragraph before Moneyball. You should link it there.
  • Is it necessary to link veteran while describing Cliff Booth in the 3rd paragraph?
  • In the 3rd paragraph of the third lede, correct "2020" to "2019" when referring to the release year for Once Upon a Time in Hollywood.

But overall, another great article. ~ HAL333 04:46, 7 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support - Article is well written and looks better with some of the minor changes. --Jaberts123 (talk) 04:07, 8 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • " in fantasy romantic drama " I would say "the" in there, and this is a sea of blue, fantasy and romantic drama both linked butted up together.
  • "In the film, Pitt played Cliff Booth, a war veteran skilled in hand-to-hand combat.[18]" this is interesting, but is it relevant to the awards?
  • "Critics' Choice Awards" aren't they called "Critics' Choice Movie Awards"?
  • Just a question really, you say he's won two Academy Awards (for example) but one of those was for the movie, not him individually. Isn't it misleading to say that he himself has won two Oscars?
  • AFI Awards: they seem to award multiple "Movie of The Year Award"s, so perhaps call it "Movies of The Year Award"
  • Clicking on [show] in the infobox for "Awards and nominations" shows nothing...
  • Ref 119 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.

That's it, this is a WikiCup review by the way. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 09:11, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, All done. Thanks for the comments. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 11:33, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Not really, the awards that were given to films he starred in are still there, not just his own personal awards. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 11:59, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The Rambling Man, Removed. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:22, 12 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The Rambling Man, why remove the awards he won as a producer? The Academy Award rules for the Best Picture category clearly state that "this award goes to the producers of the film", and it applies to other awards like the Golden Globe for Best Motion Picture – Drama that is presented to "the individual producer(s) accredited by the Producers Guild". So I think the award he won for producing 12 Years a Slave should stay. --Leo Mercury (talk) 20:39, 15 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Drive by comment from Aoba47 edit

  • I unfortunately do not have time to do a full review, but I just wanted to comment that the caption for the infobox image should mention where it was taken and not just the year. Aoba47 (talk) 03:11, 27 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Source review from Aza24 – pass

Doing now... Aza24 (talk) 22:31, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • I'd rather see refs 20–22 in templates like the others
  • Ref 23 should have ISBN 13 (use the converter)
  • Got through half of them, more later. Looking good so far though. Aza24 (talk) 22:56, 30 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hmm not sure about 58. It looks like the archive date is the same as the publishing date (January 3, 2020) but the publishing date isn't listed when it would make sense to do so since one can't assume the two to be the same
  • Ref #67 is missing the author (this ref for "The wrap" might also make more sense in the cite news template)
  • 75 missing author and date (it's in small text at the top)
  • 77 missing author

Everything else looks good from what I can see, very thorough – good work here. Aza24 (talk) 04:49, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Pass for source review - Aza24 (talk) 05:20, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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