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List of accolades received by Velaiilla Pattadhari

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Nominator(s):  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 16:18, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article provides a listing of the notable awards and nominations received by the 2014 Indian Tamil comedy-drama film, Velaiilla Pattadhari starring Dhanush and Amala Paul. This film is notable for garnering its cast and crew members, especially Dhanush, several awards and nominations. It is my eighth attempt at a accolades FLC. Any constructive comments to improve this list are most welcome.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 16:18, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47
  • I think the following part of the lead can be revised to flow better (a civil engineering graduate who is unemployed for four years, and his search for a job, which he gets), specifically with how the sentence ends with a verb. I am not sure "which he gets" is entirely necessary, so I think you can remove it and that would fix that part.
  • For the phrase (it received seven nominations and won five), I think you need to add "awards" after "five" to complete the phrase as without the word, it sounds like you are saying it won five "nominations".
  • In the phrase (It garnered eleven nominations at the), the "eleven" should be put as "11".

Great work with this list; once my relatively minor comments are addressed, I will support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 17:08, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Aoba47: I have resolved the first two comments. As for the third, I'll stick to "eleven" so as to maintain consistency in case other fellow editors question it in future. I hope you understand. Thank you for reviewing as usual, Aoba.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:19, 2 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: Thanks Aoba. Your thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:28, 3 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: I'm currently taking a break from reviewing as per my talk page statement. Good luck with your FLC though, looks great.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:05, 5 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: Thank you for asking, Aoba. Yes, my weekend is good. Hope yours is too.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 08:42, 6 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Caption in infobox needs full stop.
  • No need to relink ₹.
  • "Surbhi,[3] " why specifically inline reference that?
  • "a job. As soon as he finds a job" repetitive, suggest you replace the "a job" with "employment".
  • "Recipients and Nominees" -> "Recipients/nominees" (because it's misleading, the nominees aren't listed for those awards which this film won...)

Otherwise a good piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:41, 25 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: All of your above comments have been resolved, TRM.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 09:32, 26 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Yashthepunisher
  • Mention the english translation of the title.
  • The alt text is missing a fullstop.
  • 'Tamil-language comedy drama' seems too much. Trim it to 'tamil comedy drama'.
For some reason, languages must always be mentioned this way. Kailash29792 (talk) 15:42, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • VIP was Velraj's directorial debut, I guess that should be mentioned.
  • The name of supporting actor is too long. Try trimming it down.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:39, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher: All of the above comments (except the one Kailash has enquired about) have been resolved.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 16:00, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Yashthepunisher: Thanks Yash. Your thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 16:21, 29 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Kailash

Just two comments: One, Vela Illa Pattadhaari (Title Song) must be within quotes since it is a song name. And I think "title song" can be removed since it is obvious that it is a song. Two, as mentioned by Aoba47 at Trisha filmography (now a FL), "make sure that all of the works and publishers are consistently cited in all of the references, and not just for the first use". But this list is otherwise perfect to me. Kailash29792 (talk) 11:57, 7 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Kailash29792: Resolved the "title song". As for the second one, I think I have done that. If not, can you point out any instance where I haven't. That would be great.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 13:57, 7 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Support: All my comments have been addressed. --Kailash29792 (talk) 04:47, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Kailash29792: Thanks Kailash. Your thoughts and comments are greatly appreciated.  — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 13:22, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 20:13, 9 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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