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List of accolades received by Thondimuthalum Driksakshiyum edit

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Nominator(s): PK743 (talk) 13:05, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel the list meets FL criteria. This article provides a listing of the notable awards and nominations received by the 2017 Indian drama film Thondimuthalum Driksakshiyum. This film is notable for garnering its cast and crew members, especially Fahadh Faasil, several awards and nominations. I hope to receive constructive comments to improve this list. PK743 (talk) 13:05, 1 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:47, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Show the actor's full name in the image caption
Done
  • "It was produced by Sandip Senan and Anish M. Thomas under production company, Urvasi Theatres" => "It was produced by Sandip Senan and Anish M. Thomas the under production company Urvasi Theatres"
Done
  • "grossed ₹179.3 million at Kerala Box office" - firstly, "box" definitely shouldn't have a capital B. Also, when you say it grossed this amount at the Kerala box office, does this mean it grossed this much only in that one state? Was it not shown in other states? The source seems a bit unclear on that point.
Done In the article as it stated "The movie is all set to touch the 18 Crore collections at the Kerala box office", film was released worldwide but there no reliable sources of worldwide collection.
If that genuinely is the figure for just one state (not the whole of India) then I would simply say "grossed ₹179.3 million in Kerala" and remove the unnecessary words "box office" altogether...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:24, 4 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done
  • The Hindu should be in italics
Done
  • "At 65th Filmfare Awards South " => "At the 65th Filmfare Awards South "
Done
  • "At 48th Kerala State Film Awards" => "At the 48th Kerala State Film Awards"
Done
  • " At 7th South Indian International Movie Awards" => " At the 7th South Indian International Movie Awards"
Done
  • In the table, people's names should sort based on their surname, eg Alencier Ley Lopez should sort under L, not A
Done
@ChrisTheDude: Thanks for your comments and support appreciate it. PK743 (talk) 14:41, 16 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 15:43, 16 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • There is a comma after At the 65th National Film Awards, but not after At the 65th Filmfare Awards South, At the 48th Kerala State Film Awards, and At the 7th South Indian International Movie Awards. I would add a comma after the latter three prepositional phrases to be uniform.

Everything else looks great. ~ HAL333 14:15, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@HAL333: Done Added commas. Thanks for your comment. PK743 (talk) 14:41, 16 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Nicely done. ~ HAL333 15:43, 16 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@HAL333: Thanks for your support appreciate it. PK743 (talk) 16:57, 16 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Ab207 (talk) 07:36, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • Does North American Film Awards qualify WP:FILMCRITICLIST? We should be extra sure as its the only one in the list without a Wikipedia article to demostrate its notability, and supported only by a primary source.
North American Film Awards are awarded from 2016 successively, which is attended by prominent people from Malayalam film industry.[2][3][4] Due to COVID-19 2020 NAFA edition is postponed.[5]
@PK743: As FILMCRITICLIST says "Awards included in lists should have a Wikipedia article to demonstrate notability." I'd insist on going ahead with the article creation if it has to be included.--Ab207 (talk) 10:47, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Ab207: Removed North American Film Awards. PK743 (talk) 07:09, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • APHerald link [2] is redirecting to its main page with no archived link either. Does not seem to be a reliable source per WP:ICTFSOURCES.
Replaced it with a new source.
  • Apart from above, I find no major issues. -- Ab207 (talk) 09:49, 27 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Ab207: Thanks for your comments. PK743 (talk) 04:50, 8 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support My concerns have been addressed. Good work overall. --Ab207 (talk) 07:36, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Ab207: Thanks for your support appreciate it.PK743 (talk) 08:03, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - Pass edit

  • Refs 2, 3, 4, 6, 14 need authors
Updated authors in the mentioned refs.
  • The AP herald link was not redirecting to its main page like the user above said – for me at least
Replaced it with a new source.
  • Ref 20 should have a "|language=Malayalam" parameter, not the "in Malayalam" outside of the ref template
Resolved the error and added language inside template.
As the link is broken and redirecting to Indian Herald replaced it with Firstpost Article.
  • @PK743: Courtesy ping for nominator who may have missed these and the above comments Aza24 (talk) 08:05, 7 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Aza24: Thanks for your comments. PK743 (talk) 04:50, 8 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Good work! Pass for source review.
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 23:17, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • "and one International Film Festival of Kerala." This needs "award" after it, or it sounds like the film received a festival, which clearly wasn't the case.
Resolved
  • According to MOS:LAYOUT, the see also section should go before the notes.
Rearranged the sections according to MOS:LAYOUT.
  • "Alphabetical" doesn't need to be capitalized in note b.
Resolved
  • The references have a mix of author's last names appearing either before or after the first names. Pick one style and stick with it through the citation list. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:20, 15 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
In some articles only initials are mentioned rather the full last name, wherever author name is mentioned its in the sequence of last name before first name.
@Giants2008: Thanks for your comments. PK743 (talk) 07:09, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – My concerns have been satisfactorily addressed. Giants2008 (Talk) 23:17, 17 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 15:03, 25 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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