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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 17 December 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of accolades received by The Shape of Water edit

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Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk 08:30, 11 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Shape of Water 2017 American romantic fantasy film directed by Guillermo del Toro and written by del Toro and Vanessa Taylor. It stars Sally Hawkins, Michael Shannon, Richard Jenkins, Doug Jones, Michael Stuhlbarg, and Octavia Spencer. Set in Baltimore, Maryland in 1962, the story follows a mute cleaner at a high-security government laboratory who falls in love with a captured humanoid amphibian creature. The film won four Academy Awards including Best Picture at the 2018 ceremony. This is my fifth film accolades list to be nominated for featured list status, and I largely based the format off of the accolades lists for The Artist, The Big Short, 1917, and Slumdog Millionaire which were promoted in October 2015, January 2021, November 2020, and June 2021, respectively. I will gladly accept your comments to improve this list. Birdienest81talk 08:30, 11 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "romantic dark fantasy film" sea of blue. And not sure that "dark" is appropriately linked in any case.
  • Fixed: Removed the word "dark" to now read "Romantic fantasy film" with romantic fantasy wikilinked per the film's main article.
  • "...featured roles.[2]" referenced yet "... the production design." not?
  • Fixed: Used TV Guide listing of film's cast and crew for reference.
  • "195 million" non breaking space.
  • Fixed: Added   template between "195" and "million".
  • "The film garnered" garnered is repetitive here.
  • Fixed: Changed second "garnered" to "earned".
  • "winningfor" space.
  • In fact no need for "for".
  • Fixed: Removed the word "for".
  • Ref 2 and ref 49 have spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes.
  • Fixed: Replaced spaced hyphens with en-dashes.

That's a quick pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 08:45, 11 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: - Done: I have made corrections based on your comments from up above.
--Birdienest81talk 09:14, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:09, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
*"Alexandre Desplat composed the film's musical score, while Paul Denham Austerberry, Jeff Melvin, and Shane Vieau were responsible for the production design." - source? Seems odd to source the starring actors but not this arguably more obscure information.
  • Fixed: Used TV Guide Cast and Crew listing for film as the reference.
  • Paul Denham Austerberry should sort under A - Denham is his middle name, not the first part of his surname
  • Fixed: Paul Denham Austerberry now sorts under A rather than D.
  • Doug Jones should sort under J, not D
  • Fixed: Doug Jones now sorts under J rather than D.
  • Mike Hill should sort under H not M
  • Fixed: Mike Hill now sorts under H rather than M.
  • Note a should not have a full stop
  • Fixed: Removed period on note a.
  • That's it from me (in addition to TRM's comments) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:50, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: - Done: I have addressed all the comments from up above and made the appropriate adjustments or corrections.
--Birdienest81talk 09:13, 12 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pamzeis edit

  • Doug Jones, Michael Stuhlbarg and Octavia Spencer in — add a MOS:SERIAL comma after "Stuhlbarg"
  • acting of its cast — ... what else does the cast do?
  • including Best Picture, Best Director → including Best Picture and Best Director
  • Best Director (Del Toro) — as he is the only director, I think "(Del Toro)" can be removed
  • It was the second fantasy film → It is the second fantasy film (MOS:TENSE)
  • Director and Golden Globe Award for Best Original Score → Director and Best Original Score (the reader will already know it's the Golden Globes)

Not much, close enough to support. BTW, I'd appreciate any comments here. Best of luck with this list! Pamzeis (talk) 01:17, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

BTW, I'd appreciate any comments here. Thanks. Pamzeis (talk) 07:34, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Pamzeis: - Done: I made all the corrections based on the comments you posted. I was studying for a test and had a toothache. Therefore, my response was delayed a bit.
--Birdienest81talk 08:20, 20 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review — Pass edit

Comments by RunningTiger123 edit

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:35, 11 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

--Birdienest81talk 03:12, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support – I made one small tweak to a category title, but all of the other changes look great! (And thanks for noting the name change; I can't keep up with all of the different award groups nowadays.) RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:57, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:28, 16 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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