Comments by Vivvt
- "romantic comedy-drama film written and directed by David O. Russell" and the next sentence says its an adaptation of a book by Matthew Quick. So technically Russell did not write the film. He is the screenplay writer.
- "the novel of same name by Matthew Quick," comma should be replaced with semi-colon.
- "The film tells the story of a man, Patrizio "Pat" Solitano, Jr., .... love with a young widow, Tiffany Maxwell." --> "The film tells the story of a man, Patrizio "Pat" Solitano, Jr. (Bradley Cooper), .... love with a young widow, Tiffany Maxwell (Jennifer Lawrence)."
- "particular praise for its direction, screenplay and the performances". place an Oxford comma after screenplay. Also after Jennifer Lawrence in the same sentence.
- "At the 66th ceremony of the British Academy Film Awards". Simply "66th British Academy Film Awards"
- "Film Independent Spirit Awards and Satellite Awards." place an Oxford comma after Spirit Awards. - Vivvt (Talk) 06:42, 11 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- @Vivvt: Thanks for the review. I believe I've taken care of your comments. -- Frankie talk 12:34, 11 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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