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List of accolades received by Padmaavat

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Nominator(s): Mr. Smart LION 11:58, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This list provides notable awards and nominations received by the 2018 Indian Hindi epic period drama film. The film is notable for Ranveer Singh, who received several awards for his role as Sultan Alauddin Khalji. This is my second attempt after a successful first attempt. If there are any comments regarding the list, will try to resolve it. Mr. Smart LION 11:58, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • "Set in 1303 AD medieval India, Padmaavat is the story of honor, valor and obsession" => "Set in medieval India in 1303 AD, Padmaavat is a story of honor, valor and obsession"
  • "It garnered twenty one nominations" => "It garnered twenty-one nominations"
  • "won eight awards, including Song of The Year for Ghoomar" - the song title should have quotation marks, and there's also no need to link it again as it was only linked in the previous sentence
  • No need to link Singh in the last sentence as he has already been linked in the lead
  • "It also received five nominations for Best Film, Best Director, Best Actress for Deepika Padukone and Best Actor for Ranveer Singh and Shahid Kapoor at the Indian Film Festival of Melbourne, winning none." => "It also received five nominations for Best Film, Best Director, Best Actress for Deepika Padukone and Best Actor for Ranveer Singh and Shahid Kapoor at the Indian Film Festival of Melbourne, but did not win any of the awards."
  • In the table's first column, why is "Films of India Online Awards" centred, unlinked and in bold, a completely different format to all the others?
  • Near the top of the table you have e.g. "Kruti Mahesh Midya (for the song "Ghoomar")", but then further down the format changes to simply "Shreya Ghoshal - "Ghoomar"" - be consistent
  • Linking of things that appear multiple times in the table is inconsistent - some items are linked multiple times, others are not
  • Sorting on the "reciepients" column doesn't work - the items starting with a " all appear at the top, and people's names sort by forename when they should sort by surname
  • Think that's it from me...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:33, 6 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude:  Done Mr. Smart LION 09:56, 6 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: I'm not able to understand that line. Mr. Smart LION 10:40, 6 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
When you sort the "receipients" column, it should be in alphabetical order, and for people it should be based on the surname, so Ranveer Singh needs to sort under "S". So in Singh's case, rather than simply wikilinking the name, you need to use {{sortname|Ranveer|Singh}}. This will make Singh's name sort under S. You need to do this for the first name listed in each cell. Also, where a value starts with a ", those are currently appearing at the top, because punctuation marks sort before letters. So in those cases you would need to type {{sort|Ghoomar|"[[Ghoomar (song)|Ghoomar]]"}} to make it appear under "G". Does that help? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:46, 6 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude:  Done Mr. Smart LION 14:31, 6 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
You still need to fix the five rows where the recipient starts with a " - at the moment these all sort at the top -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:32, 7 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Mr. Smart LION 13:12, 7 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
  • "The film's script and screenplay were penned by Sanjay Leela Bhansali". 'penned' sounds idiomatic.
  • Mention the cinematographer's name in the first para.
  • Rephrase the 'honor, valor' bit and write a more straight forward plot synopsis.

Yashthepunisher (talk) 22:01, 8 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Yashthepunisher:  Done Thanks for taking some time to review it. Mr. Smart LION 05:55, 9 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:31, 27 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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