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List of accolades received by Dil Chahta Hai

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List of accolades received by Dil Chahta Hai (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:56, 9 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this because I believe this list is comprehensive enough... —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:56, 9 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • Image caption is a complete sentence so needs a full stop
  • "Dil Chahta Hai premiered at theatres 10 August 2001" => "Dil Chahta Hai premiered at theatres on 10 August 2001"
  • "Although succeeded commercially in metropolitan areas" => "Although the film succeeded commercially in metropolitan areas"
  • "and won seven of which" => "and won seven"
  • "that include Best Supporting Actor" => "including Best Supporting Actor"
  • Shaan and most (but not all) of the uses of Shankar–Ehsaan–Loy sort at the top of the recipients column, can't figure out why but it's definitely wrong
  • Some uses of Saif Ali Khan sort under A (other sort under K). I am pretty sure that his surname is just Khan, so it should sort under K
  • That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:15, 9 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:37, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • You missed the full stop on the image caption but I added that and am now happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:49, 10 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

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  • Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
  • Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. --PresN 14:39, 15 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:25, 16 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis - support

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Source, image, and prose reviewing this all at once. However source looks all good so that's an immediate source pass. The infobox image is fine license-wise, but I'd like a less blurry image; the lack of clarity is kind of annoying. GeraldWL 07:06, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from GeraldWL 15:56, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
* "and produced by Ritesh Sidhwani under Excel Entertainment." This is redundant as neither Ritesh not Excel received any of the accolades.
No, it's important. The producer should always be mentioned. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:11, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Principal photography was done by Ravi K. Chandran, and Yunus Pathan worked as the art director. Arjun Bhasin was the costume designer," is also redundant for the same reason. As well as "Sonali Kulkarni, and Dimple Kapadia"; for the sake of readability, Preity can also be dropped here since we dont need to list all accolade-receiving peeps in the lead.
This too. All the lead cast should be mentioned, along with other important crew. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:11, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hmmm, I believe you're employing the film article guidelines to the accolade article. Technically, unless he won an award, no one needs info on the cinematographer in the accolade article, and I believe there's no guidelines requiring such. Many accolade articles I've seen also don't include all these information, unless needed. Preity Zinta, Sonali Kulkarni, and Dimple Kapadia I believe are additional cast, not the ensemble, which reduces the importance of this in the lead unless they hold some significance in the list. GeraldWL 01:48, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done but the female cast is not removed because they are also lead and important throughout the film. The lead cast should always be prioritised. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:13, 21 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Dil Chahta Hai premiered at theatres"-- you can merge this paragraph with the first, then change "Dil Chahta Hai" to "The film". It is also safe to assume that films premiere in theaters, so "at theaters" can be removed.
  • "praised for its realistic portrayal of Indian youth"-- this is redundant to an article about the accolades.
  • "Awards and nominations received by Dil Chahta Hai" --> "Accolades received by Dil Chahta Hai"
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:11, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:11, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 00:36, 24 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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