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List of accolades received by Charlize Theron edit

List of accolades received by Charlize Theron (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 10:14, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Charlize Theron is a South African and American actress. She has won many awards including Academy Award for Best Actress and Golden Globe Award for Best Actress in a Motion Picture – Drama. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 10:14, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • Pedantically, a single actor can't win the Screen Actors Guild Award for Outstanding Performance by a Cast in a Motion Picture - she was one of a number of people nominated (this also applies to the two entries on the table for this award and any other "ensemble" award - you need to note with whom she shared the nomination)
  • "Theron appeared in Niki Caro's drama North Country, in the film she portrayed" - that comma should be a semi-colon
  • "Theron performance in the film" - missing 's
  • When sorting the Result column, it goes Won > Nominated > 3rd > 2nd. I think it should go Won > 2nd > 3rd > Nominated.
  • Neither note is a full sentence, so they don't need full stops. Also, the second one needs a capital letter at the start.
  • Think that's it from me. Great work once again, Cap! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Support from The Squirrel Conspiracy edit

Excellent work. I couldn't find much to say here.

Image review: Photo is an own work by a photographer with a long history of valid contributions on Commons. No issues or concerns regarding the license.

Content review:

  • The lead is very link heavy. I'd remove links to common terms like the three links in "biographical crime drama", "iron mine", and "Fox News", and consider also delinking "breakthrough role"
  • You have two different notes labeled "[a]" in two different places - one in the infobox and the other in the column header. Consider changing this (either manually renaming one of the "[a}"s or moving the infobox note into the Notes level 2 header)

Please ping me when you've responded and want me to circle back. Cheers, The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 17:20, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The Squirrel Conspiracy, I have removed the links for common words. I'm afraid that I can't do anything about the note issue; this was talked about for a bit in January 2020 (Template talk:Infobox awards list#Automatically generated efn & References section) ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 17:43, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
That was easy. Support. The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 18:29, 3 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from MWright96 (talk) 16:36, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments from MWright96
  • "Charlize Theron is a South African and American actress" - shouldn't it be South African-born American actress?
  • "In 2005, Theron appeared in Niki Caro's drama North Country; in the film she portrayed a single mother and an iron mine worker experiencing sexual harassment." - think this can be In 2005, Theron appeared in Niki Caro's drama North Country as a single mother and ironworker experiencing sexual harassment.
  • "Theron received widespread acclaim for her performance, and she won the" - winning the is better
  • Wikilink MTV Movie Award for Best Female Performance in the lead
  • "and earned her the nominations for the Academy Award for Best Actress" - the first "the" isn't needed
  • The rest of the columns beside the Ref(s) columns in the accolades and honors table are missing scope=col for compliance with MOS:DTT
  • The year 2004 in the Irish Film & Television Drama Academy should be wikilinked to 2nd Irish Film & Television Awards
  • On the whole, the years in the appropriate rows that are not wikilinked should be linked to the individual ceremonies
  • The wikilink Best International Film Actress in the Irish Film & Television Drama Academy row is a redirect and will require addressing
  • Ref 1 does not need the ISBN number since BBC News is not a print source
  • Ref 10 is missing the date it was published
  • The date for Ref 21 should be February 9, 2020 because we're not yet at September 2
  • Ref 36 title: "Dallas-fort Worth Film Critics Association" - the word in bold should begin with a capital letter
  • Ref 43 is missing the date it was published
  • The work in Ref 57 should be The New York Observer not plain Observer
  • Ref 85 should include Press Trust of India as the agency that provided Business Standard with the story

That is all of the comments I have for this list. MWright96 (talk) 19:14, 7 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support Nice work! MWright96 (talk) 16:36, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - Pass edit

Doing now. Aza24 (talk) 01:17, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Ref 14 missing date
  • That's all I could find so I went ahead and added it myself :) Fmt for citations looks good and I couldn't spot any questionable sources. Pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 01:47, 17 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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