Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of accolades received by Boys Don't Cry (film)/archive1
List of accolades received by Boys Don't Cry (film) (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 19:25, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe that it meets the criteria. I recently created the article as a fork from the article Boys Don't Cry (film), which I am working hard at to get to FA status. Even more recently, I did some cleanup on it, mainly looking through archives to find better sources. Checking the article against other similar FLs, I definitely think it can meet the criteria. Thank you to any willing reviewers in advance and I look forward to reading and addressing your comments! :) Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 19:25, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 16:52, 20 August 2015 (UTC) |
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So lots of work to be done. If you feel you with or without someone's help can meet the above points, be my guest and sort them. Although I think it maybe better to sort them out outside of the FLC process in a peer review. You are fortunate that a lot of new FLs have been made in this area so you've got lots of good examples to look at: e.g. List of accolades received by 12 Years a Slave (film) (one of my ones), List of accolades received by Queen (film). Cowlibob (talk) 21:20, 13 August 2015 (UTC)
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Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 12:09, 29 August 2015 (UTC) |
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Comments by Birdienest81
edit- Comments: Here is a link to an archived version of the Critics Choice Awards website that lists Hilary Swank's award for Boys Don't Cry. I'll fix the link if you want me to.
- --Birdienest81 (talk) 04:32, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
- @Birdienest81: Thank you! It turns out the association which runs the awards had just changed their domain. archive.is is apparently discouraged (there was a big RFC) but I found the url on Wayback Machine. Are you planning on taking a look through the list? :) Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 13:19, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
- @BenLinus1214:: Two more things I will suggest:
- Replace ref 7 with this link this one because when I click on the current one you have, nothing appears because the information about the 72nd Academy Awards was derived from a awards search which times out. The one I gave you at least keeps the mention of Best Actress without timing out.
- The Oscars urls are really unstable, hopefully this one will be better. Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 00:04, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Remove Oscars.org from the work paramater, and at "(AMPAS)" after Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences in the publisher field.
- done
- Otherwise, this list looks promising, so I'll support it. You may want to ask others for feedback because I may not have caught other errors.
Comments by Gen. Quon
editTentative Support
- The period should go outside the quotation marks in the phrase "critical knockout", per WP:LQUOTE
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- I would amend the following sentence so that it reads: "The review aggregator Rotten Tomatoes surveyed 76 reviews and judged 88% of them' 'to be positive." (Or something similar, I just feel hanging 88% there is a little hard to follow)
- done
- What I would do for the Guldbagger Awards reference issue is just add a little note at the end of the reference that says something like: "Note: 'Award' and 'Year' must be manually entered", or something like that
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- This might just be a stylistic preference on my part, but in Ref 1, for instance, you don't have a wikilink to The New York Times, but in the very next reference, you do link The Washington Post. I would either link all of 'em, or link non of 'em.
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@Gen. Quon: Thanks for the comments! Johanna (aka BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 15:36, 17 August 2015 (UTC) Just a few things. This looks like a very good list!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:34, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Awesome. Support.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 17:38, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
- Comments from West Virginian
- Support: BenLinus1214, following my comprehensive and thorough review and re-review of this article, I assess that it meets Wikipedia:Featured list criteria and the guidelines set forth in Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. This list is also in keeping with other featured lists of film accolades. All previous issues seem to have been identified by Cowlibob, Birdienest81, and Gen. Quon and addressed. Congratulations on a job well done! -- West Virginian (talk) 04:35, 20 August 2015 (UTC)
Comments from FrB.TG
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@FrB.TG: I believe I have addressed all your concerns. Thank you for the feedback!
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- Support – excellent work on a very good film. -- Frankie talk 14:04, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
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