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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Scorpion0422 22:30, 2 December 2008 [1].

List of Sacramento Kings head coaches edit

I am nominating because I think it fulfills the FL criteria.—Chris! ct 00:05, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved review from SRX [TRUco]

Comment - excellent list,

  • In the table, for coach Harrison, his achievement states 1 championship (1951), I believe it would be better worded as being NBA Championship (1951). Other than that, prose checks out fine.--TRUCO 00:47, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done —Chris! ct 01:10, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - my review was resolved to improve the article to FL standards.--TRUCO 01:24, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment I would change the level 2 headings for the key and table to level 3 or lower, so they are not so split up, and can be edited more easily together, then make a level 2 header called coaches that includes both. (or some other combination of titles, as long as key is nearer to table). Apart from that, i think it passes all the criteria and support featuring.Yobmod (talk) 09:11, 22 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 00:59, 25 November 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • "which merged with NBL to become the NBA a year later" Add the before "NBL".
  • "The franchise won its first NBA championship in the 1951 NBA Finals, while coached by Lester Harrison."-->The franchise won its first NBA championship in the 1951 NBA Finals, under the coaching of Lester Harrison. The way it is right now, the second phrase is rather disconnected from the independent clause.
  • "by a group of Kansas City businessmen,"-->by a group of businessmen from Kansas City,
  • "In 1982, the franchise was brought by a Sacramento group and became the Sacramento Kings." "Sacramento group"-->Sacramento-based group
  • "The Kings is currently owned by the Maloof family and coached by Reggie Theus." "is"-->are.
  • "It was briefly named Kansas City-Omaha Kings" Add a "the" before "Kansas City".
  • "Harrison, Bobby Wanzer, Ed Jucker, Bob Cousy, Draff Young, Jerry Reynolds and Reggie Theus have all spent their entire coaching careers with the Kings." Dabomb87 (talk) 23:58, 24 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Done all—Chris! ct 00:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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