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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 17 August 2020 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Roman Catholic archbishops of New York edit

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Nominator(s): Bloom6132 (talk) 00:16, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel its structure and formatting mirrors the other lists I have successfully nominated to FL (e.g. bishops of Hong Kong, archbishops of Vancouver, Toronto, and Quebec), and it now meets all 6 FL criteria. —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:16, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Just a couple of things from me:
    • "Newly-formed" in the lead needs a hyphen
    • Notes which are not complete sentences (just the one for Hughes's first listing, I think) don't need a full stop.
    • Note B is missing an s after an apostrophe
  • Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:31, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:16, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support: Fixed a typo found in the article; besides that, looks good to me. -- 0qd (talk) 03:55, 7 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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  • The only question I have is why bishop is capitalized in the John Hughes image caption and archbishop isn't.

Another well made list. Nice work. ~ HAL333 02:28, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@HAL333: ah, that's because of MOS:JOBTITLES. Didn't find out about that myself until March this year (in this discussion). The first mention (capitalized) is the proper job title, while the latter one isn't. —Bloom6132 (talk) 02:40, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm. You learn something new everyday. ~ HAL333 02:44, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Solid list. ~ HAL333 02:44, 8 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - Pass edit

Doing now. Aza24 (talk) 22:48, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • I would be hesitant about including locations for refs 6 and 7 since you don't include them anywhere else. You don't put it in ref 26 for the same source anyways.
  • Everything else looks good, consistent templates, formatting and reliability. Should be a quick pass if the locations are removed. Aza24 (talk) 22:58, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Aza24: removed both. I think you meant refs 7 and 8, because ref 6 (The Encyclopedia of New York City) is a book ref w/o a location parameter. —Bloom6132 (talk) 00:45, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ah yes, good catch. Keep up the good work with these lists, they are consistently concise, helpful and nicely formatted. Pass for the source review. Aza24 (talk) 01:13, 13 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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