Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of Rage Against the Machine awards/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 17:25, 14 September 2008 [1].

List of Rage Against the Machine awards edit

Gary King (talk) 22:34, 31 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay. Links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:46, 1 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"...American rap metal band..." → "...American band..." (already is specified below of text—"The band is noted...");
"The band's members are rapper..." → "Their formation consists of vocalist...";
"Rage Against the Machine has released four studio albums, all with the Epic Records record label..." → "They has released four studio albums, all through the record label Epic..."

Canniba loki 22:52, 2 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I did some copyediting on the last point. I don't agree with the other two. Gary King (talk) 00:33, 3 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Looks very good to me NapHit (talk) 19:12, 6 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Gary King (talk) 19:31, 6 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

~~Do you really think the "from left to right" thing on the caption for the image is actually needed? I knwo it's only stylististic but it jsut looks messy in my opinion.~~

I agree with the points Cannibaloki raised too the intro needs a little copyedit.

Shouldn't there be somemention of the awards themselves in the lead isntead of just the small sentence that sums them up?

~~Basically; I'd support the articles promotion if the lead in was copyeditted and expanded.~~ REZTER ^TALK ø 18:34, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done Gary King (talk) 19:06, 8 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

~~I still believe that the first few sentences need some work and Cannibaloki's comments are a good solution.~~ REZTER ^TALK ø 12:36, 13 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All done Gary King (talk) 14:37, 13 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Most of my comments were (stubbornly – delayed) resolved. Canniba loki 05:54, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support my worries have been resolved. REZTER ^TALK ø 17:35, 14 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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