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The list was promoted by Crisco 1492 11:28, 20 May 2014 (UTC) [1]].[reply]

List of National Natural Landmarks in Illinois edit

List of National Natural Landmarks in Illinois (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Dana boomer (talk) 18:24, 23 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This list follows the format of the other NNL lists that I have recently brought to FLC, with changes based on feedback from those nominations. I look forward to comments! Dana boomer (talk) 18:24, 23 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

  • No DABs nor dead links.
  • Why do the headers need to be colored?
  • You give a broad description of what NNLs are, but what about NNLs specific to Illinois? What flora/fauna make up NNLs in Illinois?
  • The coordinate system is not consistent in terms of markup; some use decimals, some do not.

Otherwise, I think this list meets featured status. Thanks for the contribution. Seattle (talk) 22:07, 4 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! The headers are similarly colored in all National Natural Landmark, National Registered Historic Place, National Historic Landmark, etc. articles (each with their own specific color). To change one, it would be necessary to change them all, and I think this was a color scheme determined by the relevant project, so it would probably need to be discussed there. The entire first paragraph is about the NNLs specific to Illinois, but I have added a sentence on the flora and fauna. To be honest, NNLs are more about the habitats and landforms, rather than the animals/plants themselves. Finally, I have standardized the coordinates. Dana boomer (talk) 12:15, 6 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
User:Seattle, do you have any further comments? Dana boomer (talk) 16:07, 27 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Meets featured list requirements. Seattle (talk) 17:16, 27 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Not blown away by the repeat of "National Natural Landmark" in the opening sentence just to get a bold intro.
  • You haven't linked Illinois in the opening para of the lead.
  • "upland forest" just links to "forest" which is a pretty common term.
  • Upland forest redirects to forest, but the forest page doesn't actually mention the term. Suggestions? - DB
  • Heron Pond should have an en-dash.
  • I don't think tallgrass is hyphenated.

Otherwise a good piece of work. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:24, 16 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've either fixed or replied to everything above. Thanks for the review! Dana boomer (talk) 17:06, 18 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support; I've taken the bold out of the opening line: it's advised against in the MoS (only the full title, not a part of it should be bolded). Nice piece of work, very well put together. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 09:37, 20 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Delegate's comment - This list has been promoted. There may be a delay while waiting for the bot to close the nomination. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:27, 20 May 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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