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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 02:00:55 22 August 2019 (UTC) [1].

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Nominator(s): NatureBoyMD (talk) 18:12, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

The Nashville Sounds minor league baseball team was known in its early years for its ownership by several country musicians. This list is the final piece needed before an attempt at a team featured topic. It follows the same style and formatting in use in other team featured lists. NatureBoyMD (talk) 18:12, 18 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • In the table, I think the asterisks to indicate new owners should come before the commas, not after. Putting them after the commas almost makes it look like the asterisk relates to the next person's name.
  • As the key only relates to the first table, put it just above it, within the "owners" section
  • "along with help from" - don't think the word "along" is needed here
  • "Richard Sterban of The Oak Ridge Boys" - maybe clarify here that the Oak Ridge Boys are a country music group
  • Think that's all from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:22, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from zmbro
  • Numbers 0–9 should be spelled out per MOS:NUMS (in owners section)
  • Lowercase "the" on "the Oak Ridge Boys" mid-sentence per MOS:THEMUSIC

Great job on this. Should be FL in no time. – zmbro (talk) 03:19, 29 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support – Good for me. – zmbro (talk) 23:19, 29 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment Support – About the only thing I can nit-pick is that Schmittou's first name probably doesn't need to be repeated in the lead. Otherwise, the list looks good. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:20, 25 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source review – All of the references are to reliable sources, and the links are all in working order. My only (minor) complaint is a formatting one I should have caught while looking at the article before: the second book reference should have the same 13-digit ISBN formatting as the other one. There are converters available online that can convert the numbers for you, if needed. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:15, 13 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • I'd say the source review has been passed, in that case. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:06, 14 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting! Nice use of thematic colors in the table headers, by the way. --PresN 02:00, 22 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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