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The list was promoted by Dabomb87 16:54, 28 November 2009 [1].

List of Minnesota Vikings starting quarterbacks

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Nominator(s): – PeeJay 00:30, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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I am nominating this for featured list because I believe that there is a lack of featured content covering the Minnesota Vikings and I have worked fairly hard to get this list to a standard comparable to that of List of Kansas City Chiefs starting quarterbacks. All of the content of the list and the prose extracted thereof is suitably references, and I believe that the lead section introduces the content of the list effectively. Since the list is based on the list of Kansas City Chiefs starting quarterbacks, there should be no issue with the style or structure, and there are also images showing both a former starting QB and the current one. Information does not change from day to day, except to update the number of games started by the team's current starting QB, which only happens once a week during the football season. – PeeJay 00:30, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from KV5
Comments from KV5
  • See MOS:BOLD: bold in the table cannot be used this way. Find a symbol to indicate HOF or use italics instead.
    • Used a dagger symbol (†) instead.
  • Last navbox doesn't link to this article and should be removed.
    • Done.
  • You use the abbreviation "QB" a lot without explicitly defining what it means. Not everyone who reads this list will know what a QB is.
    • The opening sentence of the second lead paragraph now reads "The Vikings have had 28 starting quarterbacks (QB) in the history of their franchise..." Is this enough?
  • "in their first ever game" - bad wording, change to in the franchise's first game
    • Done.
  • "future Hall of Famer retained the starting jersey" - the what? I've never heard it referred to in that way. the starter's job or the starting role would be better.
    • Done.
  • "The Vikings starting quarterback for the first game" - Vikings'
    • Done.
  • "However, he was substituted for Fran Tarkenton early on" - "substituted for" is awkward wording. Better would be replaced by
    • Done.
  • "and Tarkenton ended up passing... and rushing" - informal; replace with who passed... and rushed
    • Done.
  • "This performance resulted in Tarkenton starting 10 of the Vikings' 14 regular season matches that year." - the reference doesn't say that it was specifically this performance that made him start 10 games, it just says he started 10 games.
    • Fixed.
  • "to their first ever playoff" - first ever again, remove "ever"
    • Done.
  • "However, Cuozzo only remained in the position for two seasons" - remove "However", and "only", unnecessary modifiers
    • Done.
  • "promoted from the Vikings' second string" - you don't need to say "Vikings" twice in this awfully long sentence; remove the second "Vikings"
    • Done.
  • "half-way through his third season" - remove hyphen (halfway)
    • Done (didn't realise that it was the AmEn custom not to hyphenate).
  • "The Vikings then went through three quarterbacks in three seasons: Brad Johnson (1997),[15] Randall Cunningham (1998)[16] and Jeff George (1999);" - there's got to be a better way to say this; it's awfully informal. Also, you don't need to repeat Johnson's first name after its first occurrence. Just Johnson will suffice, since he's the only one with that last name.
  • "meaning that Johnson would have to step in again," - this is informal language, and it seems like Johnson has been in Minnesota the whole time, which he wasn't.
    • I've changed this to explain the situation better, but it is a little verbose now.
  • "and then joined the Miami Dolphins in 2006" - who did? I know it's Daunte, but it's not clear.
    • Fixed.
  • "Quarterback(s)" column should also be sortable.
  • Turn the notes at the top of the table into a key, and add to that key a note that the years link to a team season, so that they don't look like random year links.
  • Lists of NFL starting quarterbacks appears in the navbox at the bottom, remove from the "See also" section.
    • Done.

Hope these comments help. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 18:34, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments definitely always help, mate. If you could reply soon, I'd be appreciative :) – PeeJay 19:06, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Well done. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 20:24, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Can this be considered a statement of your Support then? – PeeJay 23:28, 6 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Recently, I usually wait until other reviewers' comments are presented and resolved before supporting. I know I'm not perfect as a reviewer, so I acknowledge that shortcoming by waiting to see what others find. Either way, per the FLC page, the positive resolution of comments is worth more than a declaration of support anyway. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 14:22, 7 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
That's cool, I get it. Just as long as you don't have any more comments for me, I'll be happy :-P – PeeJay 01:40, 8 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Well, if you want another comment, the list could use some more images :-D. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 01:57, 8 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I knew I shouldn't have said anything! :-P I've added a couple of images I found on Commons of Daunte Culpepper and Jim McMahon. I hope the ALT text is OK, I'm not very good at ALT text. – PeeJay 16:20, 8 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Good choices both, and the alt text is quite well-written. Cheers. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 17:19, 8 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Conditional Support from KV5 (Talk • Phils) – contingent on the resolution of the sorting issue below.

Comment from KV5 (yes, again)
  • Comment - 1) In the lead, it says "The club was founded by Minneapolis businessmen Bill Boyer, H. P. Skoglund and Max Winter in 1959..." - Only one of these is linked, yet I would assume that co-founding a pro football team is probably notable enough to have their own article. These two should probably be wikilinked. 2) "Starting" could be ambiguous to someone not familiar with football. There's no real explanation of what a "starting" quarterback is. Those of us familiar with the game know it means starting a game, but others may think it means starting a season, starting a half/quarter, or something else. A brief explanation might be nice. 3) I don't like how the list is set up. I scrolled down expecting to see a list of 28 players in chronological order of first appearance (with a section explaining exact seasons played, etc.) and instead there's a list of seasons with the QBs that played next to it. As is, I wouldn't call this article "List of Minnesota Vikings starting quarterbacks" so much as I would call it "List of Minnesota Vikings seasons by starting quarterback". I took a look through the other "starting quarterbacks" pages and see they all follow this format (including at least one FL), and I have to say I strongly disagree with the format that these pages are in. I think my solution rather than changing the whole thing around would be to keep that section, but before it add a list of each of the 28 quarterbacks by order of first appearance, along with appropriate notes. My philosophy is that you shouldn't have to work to figure out the actual 28 different QBs, they should just be right there in a chronological list rather than having to sift through every season and determine which ones are duplicates, etc. VegaDark (talk) 03:11, 9 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • Replies
      1. I don't see how this has anything to do with the quality of the list. I could link those names, but they would just be redlinks, and I don't know enough about those individuals to create decent articles about them at this time.
      2. I've added a note and moved all three notes in the article to a single section between "See also" and "References".
      3. I would rather not act on this until more people have commented. I have added a statistics section to the article, which lists every starting quarterback in his own row. It is currently in alphabetical order, but I could re-order it chronologically. The only problem with this would be that the players who had two spells with the franchise would only be listed at the point of their first spell. I'm also not too happy about the amount of statistical data in the table, but I added the stats that seemed most pertinent to a quarterback. Comments on this new table would be appreciated.
    • You may also notice that User:Gilliganfanatic has added a table with a season-by-season account of the Vikings' postseason starting quarterbacks. I'm not sure how this could be integrated with the other table(s), but I am certainly of the opinion that it should be. Again, more comments would be welcomed. – PeeJay 23:20, 10 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      • 1) While it may not affect the quality of the list portion itself, it does effect the quality of the page as a whole, which we are to consider in FLC nominations. I would rather have them redlinks than unlinked. 2) Looks good 3) I would welcome more comments on this as well, although the new "statistics" table looks like it could satisfy this by simply adding a sortable column with 1-28 next to each QB in order of first appearance. VegaDark (talk) 22:37, 11 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        • 1) OK, I've linked them. 2) Thanks. 3) I think that adding a column with 1-28 in it would be a bit confusing as readers might think that the numbers refer to the players' jersey numbers. I would much rather default sort the table by the date of the player's first appearance and then let readers sort by any other column should they so wish. – PeeJay 08:34, 12 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Quick comments' - I didn't go through the article in depth, but the statistics table doesn't seem to have a key. Also the "Record" column of that table doesn't seem to sort correctly. I am also curious about why the list should be limited to just starting quarterbacks. The statistics table shows the record of each quarterback including games started and not started, so just a little piece of the team's QB story seems to be missing with the quarterbacks who played but never started a game. An alternate approach, but maybe over complicated, would be to show the stats for each (starting) quarterback in for each season, and the current statistics table would serve as the totals. Rlendog (talk) 15:28, 13 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • The statistics table uses tooltips (see Template:tooltip) as a key. If you hover your cursor over the column header, an explanation of the abbreviation will appear.
    • I'm not sure how to fix the sorting of the "Record" column. Any suggestions would be appreciated.
      • It looks like the record column has been removed, which is fine, but to sort you could use the [[{{{1}}}]] template, and sort based on a 4 digit number with one or more leading zeros and the number of wins. Rlendog (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        • Is the sort template really necessary now? The content of the "W", "L" and "T" columns is now purely numerical with no positive or negative symbols, so the sorting should work perfectly without the need for an extra template. – PeeJay 17:45, 21 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • I could be wrong here, but in my experience, teams rarely substitute their quarterback during a game. It does happen, hence why we need to refer to "the starting quarterback" and not just "the quarterback", but changes would only occur if the player is injured or the team is so far ahead that they can afford to bring on their second-string QB. Either way, it is only really the starting QB who matters, which is why only the stats for the starting QBs have been included (although those stats include times when the player was brought on during the game).
      • The starting QB usually finishes the game, but not always. For example, the backup will enter the game in case of injury or a blowout. So Fran Tarkenton played 177 games but only started 170. Or Brooks Bollinger played 7 games but only started 1. But if he didn't start that one game, he would have played 6 but started none, and wouldn't have made the list. So I am suggesting that the QBs who only came in as substitutes should be included, at least in the master list. Rlendog (talk) 16:44, 21 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        • I'm sorry, but I don't agree with this. If the article was "List of Minnesota Vikings quarterbacks", then perhaps including all of the players who played at QB for the team would be appropriate, but this list and all others like it focus only on starting quarterbacks. The fact that the statistics cover all appearances is a bit of a peeve, but it's not worth breaking the custom over. – PeeJay 17:45, 21 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
        • Just one more small point: how would you define a QB? If we're talking about anyone on this list, then that seems to include anyone who has ever made a pass for the Vikings whether they are a recognised QB or not. How would you suggest we filter the QBs from the FSs? – PeeJay 18:00, 21 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
          • That is a good point. I am not sure whether or not there is a reliable source for who actually played QB. I thought pro-football-reference would have that, but they only list who was a QB on the roster and who threw passes. I still think the chart seems incomplete without including the players who played QB but didn't start. And I realize the the list is titled "Starting QBs" and not just "QBs", which is the basic issue - why have a list that limits to just a subset of the Vikings' QB, rather than have a list that includes everyone. But the answer may be that there are no RSes for everyone who played QB, just those that started there. So I can support. Rlendog (talk) 01:36, 28 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • I think the approach you suggest would be too complicated, but please feel free to create an example list in your userspace so that we can see what your suggestion would look like. – PeeJay 11:03, 18 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (27 and counting) 22:12, 25 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments –
  • "The Vikings are a member of the Northern Division of the National Football Conference in the National Football League." The division is officially the North division, which is what we should probably call it here.
    • Done.
  • The Reference(s) header could be changed to just Ref(s) in order to reduce the size of the column.
    • Done.
  • Starting quarterbacks in the postseason: Why are the players sorting by first name instead of last name?
  • The Reference(s) header can again be shortened, and shouldn't be sortable.
    • Done.
  • Statistics: Sorting in the record and rushing attempts columns aren't sorting properly. The first needs an extra template for each number, and the negative amount for Brett Favre is throwing off the latter column when sorting from lowest to highest (other way works fine). Giants2008 (27 and counting) 23:26, 15 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support – The hyphen work-around for the sorting is not ideal, but it is the best solution possible given the situation. Everything else looks fine. Giants2008 (27 and counting) 22:12, 25 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Quick comment


Resolved comments from NMajdan
Comments
  • "The Minnesota Vikings is a professional American football..." / "The Vikings are members of the North Division". Is it singular or plural? I don't know the correct way, but they should at least be consistent.
  • Use non-breaking spaces as specified at WP:NBSP.
    • I've added non-breaking spaces where I thought they were necessary, but if I've missed some places where you think one should be, please point them out.
  • I think the Statistics section should include a legend instead of or in addition to the tooltip template. Per WP:ACCESSIBILITY, "Don't use techniques that require physical action to provide information, such as tooltips or any other "hover" text."
    • Can do.
      • I'm gonna be picky. Can you have the legend split over a few additional columns so it doesn't push the table down as far? I think a 4 column table would be fine with columns 1 & 3 being the abbreviations and 2 & 4 being the explanation.—NMajdan•talk
        • Done.
  • Remove the sort function from the ref column in the Statistics section as you did the Starting quarterbacks by season section.
    • Done.

—NMajdan•talk 19:18, 18 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the comments. Further comments would be appreciated if you think there's anything else that needs commenting on. – PeeJay 20:23, 18 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Per Rlendog's comments, it might be best to split the "Record" column in the Statistics table into two columns so they are easily sortable.—NMajdan•talk 22:30, 18 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I have split the "Record" column into three separate columns for wins, losses and ties. – PeeJay 21:46, 19 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Despite the lingering issues with the sorting of the rushing yards column, I feel this meets the criteria for FL. Let's hope somebody out there knows how to resolve this ongoing sort issue or Favre finishes the season with positive rushing yards.—NMajdan•talk 17:49, 23 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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