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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Crisco 1492 08:57, 22 November 2014 [1].

List of ICC Champions Trophy five-wicket hauls

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Nominator(s): —Vensatry (ping) 13:41, 19 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

A cricket list based on List of Cricket World Cup five-wicket hauls, an existing FL. Look forward to your comments and suggestions —Vensatry (ping) 13:41, 19 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from — NickGibson3900 Talk
;Comments from NickGibson3900 Talk
  • "In cricket, a five-wicket haul (also known..." - Link five-wicket haul
  • Reference 2: Inconsistent date formatting with rest of article, publishing date is wrong it was published on 16th not the 17th
  • Key needs a note on what "result" means
  • Although not part of the criteria, please add {{International cricket five-wicket hauls}} to the article as this article is on that template

Very good article a will support once those minor quibbles have been fixed. Waiting for you at my nom - NickGibson3900 Talk 04:02, 23 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed all. Thanks for your comments. I'll comment on your nom soon. —Vensatry (ping) 05:59, 25 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
More comments from NickGibson3900 Talk
  • As ref 1 is the first ESPN ref it should link to ESPNcricinfo not ref 4
  • For the FLC delegates consider this a Support if my above comment has been addressed. Sorry Vensatry for the delay. - NickGibson3900 Talk 05:18, 29 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from --Khadar Khani (talk) 23:49, 15 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Comments—
  • I think the prose should be in past tense since the 2013 ICC Champions Trophy was the last edition of the tournament.
    • Can you be a little more specific on what needs to be changed. —Vensatry (ping) 08:42, 11 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
      • For example ".. a total of 10 fifers have been taken by as many players." may be ... a total of 10 players took as many fifers. or else --Khadar Khani (talk) 22:28, 12 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "...while Bangladesh, England and Zimbabwe are yet to see a player taking a fifer in the tournament." reword the sentence accordingly (per above)
  • Add a little more about Maharoof's bowling figures
    • Apart from the fact that this is the best analysis by a bowler in the tournament's history, I don't find any special about the same. —Vensatry (ping) 08:42, 11 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • No need of 'doing so' in the last sentence

--Khadar Khani (talk) 03:02, 11 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • I still think this is redundant, the statement is clearly understandable without this. --Khadar Khani (talk) 22:28, 12 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "in the ICC Champions Trophy tournaments" not sure you need "the" here.
  • "a fifer in the ICC Champions Trophy tournaments. The ICC Champions Trophy" repetitive.
    • Since I jumped into explaining the meaning of a fifer before the tournament, I have to repeat the tournament's name while defining it. —Vensatry (ping) 19:08, 20 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • " is considered the second most significant" you use a single source for this claim, could so arguably just the opinion of one writer.
  • "As of 2013, the latest edition," why not "As of the 2013 tournament, ..."?
  • "a total of 10 fifers have" you've said this already in the previous para.
  • I would avoid "edition" altogether when referring to a specific tournament, why not just mention "the xxxx tournament" (where xxxx is a year)?
  • " to take a fifer; he took 5 " take ... took... repetitive prose.
  • Econ should be given to the same accuracy.
  • Younis Khan should be Younus Khan apparently.

The Rambling Man (talk) 20:59, 16 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support. Well-referenced list and it meets the FLC criteria. --Carioca (talk) 20:26, 19 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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