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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Scorpion0422 21:28, 23 June 2009 [1].

List of Gold Glove Award winners at second base edit

Nominator(s): KV5 (Talk • Phils) 12:14, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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Yes, again (I'm going fast with this project!). Enjoy the read; comments appreciated. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 12:14, 13 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
  • "usually referred to simply as the Gold Glove" "simply" is unnecessary here—the more concise wording implies simplicity.
  • "all of Sandberg's awards came with the Chicago Cubs."-->Sandberg [or he, your choice] won all of his awards with the Chicago Cubs.
  • Reworded a different way. Done. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 16:46, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Only one winning second baseman has ever had an errorless season"
  • Removed "ever"; kept "only" for emphasis; this is a rare feat. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 16:46, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He committed only four errors and amassed "
  • "Morgan set the National League mark with 417 in 1973" Comma after "mark" for consistency, since you use commas to set off nonessential clauses in other sentences in the lead.
  • Because it would currently be a template full of mostly redlinks. As I did with the Silver Sluggers, I will add the navbox when all articles are moved into the mainspace. If you'd like to see the navbox, it's in my sandbox. KV5 (Talk • Phils) 16:26, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 16:51, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 15:41, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comment –

  • "Ryne Sandberg has the second-highest total overall, and his nine awards are the most by a National League player, having won them with the Chicago Cubs." I thought the last part of this sentence was awkward. Can the team be mentioned earlier? Giants2008 (17-14) 21:22, 17 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Support – Looks fine, just like the rest of the list. Another great baseball awards list. Giants2008 (17-14) 21:25, 19 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support No issues remain here, good job! – (iMatthew • talk) at 01:27, 20 June 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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