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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 31 January 2019 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of Emily Blunt performances edit

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Nominator(s): Krimuk2.0 (talk) 09:24, 10 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

This is a listing of the wide range of work done by the lovely Emily Blunt. As usual, looking forward to constructive comments for improvements. Cheers! Krimuk2.0 (talk) 09:24, 10 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47
  • Please add ALT text to the infobox image. Same goes for the 2015 Cannes Film Festival image.
  • This is more of a clarification question, as I am not entirely certain myself. For this part (She began her career as a teenager in the British stage), should it be “on the British stage” rather than “in the British stage”?
  • For this part (Her first screen appearance was in the television film Boudica (2003) and), I would add a comma after “(2003)”.
  • For this part (homosexuality in Paweł Pawlikowski's drama My Summer of Love (2004)), is there any particular reason for naming the director? For a majority of the other films, you do not mention the director. I understand mentioning Krasinski for A Quiet Place given that they are married, though this one seems a little random to me. Apologies if I am missing something.
Well, Pawlikowski is a revered European film director and I thought mentioning that she made her film debut with a film directed by him will stand out in the prose. I hope that makes sense? Krimuk2.0 (talk) 07:14, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Makes sense to me; thank you for the clarification. Aoba47 (talk) 08:12, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • For this part (In 2014 she starred), I would add a comma after “2014”, and for this part (In 2018 she starred), I would add a comma after “2018”.
  • For this part (and sung songs for the soundtrack), I would say something like “recorded songs” as something about the current wording sounds odd to me.

Great work with the list. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to support this. If possible, I would greatly appreciate any feedback for my current FAC. Either way, have a great end of your week. Aoba47 (talk) 00:03, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent suggestions as usual, Aoba47. All done. :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 07:14, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for addressing everything! I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 08:12, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
    • Suggest merging the third paragraph with the second, as it's only one sentence and shouldn't really be a para in its own right
So that line would break chronology and it makes more sense to have it in a separate paragraph, if that's okay. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:54, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
In that case I would suggest amending it to "Alongside her screen work, Blunt has provided her voice to several animated (change that word - I only just noticed this - "animation films" is not natural English) films, including Gnomeo & Juliet and its sequel Sherlock Gnomes. She has also narrated......" so at least it's two sentences rather than just one..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:40, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
ChrisTheDude done. :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:48, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • Capital E on English against The Wind Rises
    • Baker's wife has a capital W in the table but not in the lead
    • For Henry VIII and Empire, do sources not say which episode(s) she was in? Or is it that she was in all of them so there's no need to specify?
They are both limited series and I guess she was in all the episodes. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:54, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
    • For her Simpsons role, suggest moving "voice" into the Notes column to be consistent with the movie table
  • Think that's it from me, other than to note the oddity that she has played three different characters called Juliet. If you ever want to cast a part called Juliet, ring Emily! :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:49, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, that's such an interesting observation. ;) Thanks for the comments, ChrisTheDude. Krimuk2.0 (talk) 18:54, 11 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Haha, thank you! :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:52, 14 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from BeatlesLedTV
  • The lead image looks weird. It's like extra zoomed in on her face; not even her whole head is showing. I'd much prefer this image from 2018.
I know it's a bit too zoomed in, but I really do prefer this image over the other, more so because this one is from a film-related event and more apt for her filmography page. I'm not sure at what event the other image was clicked. Is that alright? Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:52, 14 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • In a couple tables the year col is centered and some it isn't. Make sure they're all centered
  • Make sure all date formats are consistent (Day Month Year). Some are YYYY-MM-DD. In fact, I got a button I'll do it for ya.
Thanks for that! :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:52, 14 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
  • Little picky but make sure in the discography section, songs that start with "A, An, The, etc." are sorted by the first word, so "A Very Nice Prince" sorted as "Very Nice Prince"
  • Make sure above comment applies to film table as well, notably on A Quiet Place

Looks very good. Great job on this! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 19:55, 12 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot for the comments, BeatlesLedTV. All done! :) Krimuk2.0 (talk) 06:52, 14 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 17:26, 30 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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