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The list was promoted by Giants2008 02:24, 2 November 2015 [1].

Kerala State Film Award for Best Actress edit

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Nominator(s): —Vensatry (ping) 16:27, 28 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

A state government award list based on National Film Award for Best Actress, an existing FL. I've not included the roles played by the actresses in the table as most of them aren't notable enough outside the film. Look forward to your comments and suggestions —Vensatry (ping) 16:27, 28 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from FrB.TG

Resolved comments from Frankie talk
  • "The awardees, decided" – awardees seems a little bit odd to me. How about recipients?
    • "Awardees" is very much an encyclopedic word. —Vensatry (ping) 12:16, 5 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Since then, there have been many instances where an actress was awarded based on her performance in more than one film during a year." – I think this can rephrased as something like "Since then, several actresses have been awarded for more than one performance during a single year."
  • Why are the first letters of the words in description capitalized?
  • Please add {{Abbr}} for Refs.
  • I think references in the center look much better as opposed to be on the left side.
  • You have added that Jayabharathi has been awarded for various films in the year 1972. Could you add the names of those films in a footnote?
    • Unfortunately the official catalog doesn't specify those films. Given it was a time when the Malayalam film industry churned out numerous films, and the actress being a leading heroine in the industry then, it's certainly impossible to find out them. —Vensatry (ping) 12:16, 5 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Quite a few MOS:DASH violations to fix. -- Frankie talk 18:28, 4 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:59, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Pavanjandhyala
  • "In 1998", "took the control over the awards" — change them to "Since 1998", "has been exercising control over the awards" respectively. Because till date, the control is in the hands of the academy only.
  • "Cultural Affairs Department" or "Department of Cultural Affairs". Only one of them please.
  • Did Sheela receive the award for her role or performance in the film? Because the next sentence itself says something else.
    • "Performance" obviously, but no harm if we say "roles". After all, it's the role that helps actors win awards. —Vensatry (ping) 10:47, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I accept that. But, i have found that two instances use "roles" and the other two use "performances". i want to make sure that uniformity (say consistency) is practiced in the lead. :) Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:44, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Not really, using the same term in successive sentences would make the prose a bit monotonous. —Vensatry (ping) 15:39, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "have won the award two times in their careers" — twice in their careers.
  • "winning the accolade" — The whole paragraph says award, and this sentence says accolade. Why so?
  • Why Kerala State Chalachitra Academy is Wikilinked more than once in the references? Any specific reason?
But isn't it a general practice to link a person/newspaper/website/organisations in references only at the "first mention"? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 11:44, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
According to the "general practice", we should either link all or the first occurrence alone. —Vensatry (ping) 15:39, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Optional, but is there any logo available?
    • Unfortunately, we don't have a free image. —Vensatry (ping) 10:47, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Good job. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:59, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@FrB.TG and Pavanjandhyala: Thanks for the review and timely responses. —Vensatry (ping) 16:04, 13 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Looks a worthy candidate!♦ Dr. Blofeld 19:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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