Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Karisma Kapoor filmography/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 1 November 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
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Karisma Kapoor filmography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Karishma Kapoor is one of the most famous and widely known actress of Hindi Cinema. Recently, have added refs, re-wrote lead and tried to add all necessary things required to be a FL. All comments welcome. Thank you. 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 13:50, 31 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)
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Added @PresN: Check now please--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 05:53, 1 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 19:55, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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====Comments from HAL====
Just got interrupted... I'll get to the lead soon. ~ HAL333 22:33, 4 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 12:23, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That's all for now. ~ HAL333 16:44, 12 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support Terribly sorry for the delay. ~ HAL333 19:55, 1 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993). Anari was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993" => "Kapoor had her first commercial success in a leading role in romantic action drama Anari (1993), which was a commercial success and was one of the highest grossing films of 1993"
- Also, what's the source for that last bit?
- "From 1992–1996; she featured in" - no reason for that semi-colon to be there
- "The success of the these films" => "The success of these films"
- "in the Yash Raj's produced musical romance" => "in the Yash Raj-produced musical romance"
- "Subsequently, she played leading roles in several blockbuster films, including the comedies Hero No.1 (1997)" - you already mentioned that film. The chronological order has gone a bit weird here.........
- "acclaimed performance of a disillusioned sister of Hrithik Roshan's character in the terror drama Fiza (2000), won" - no reason for the comma before "won"
- "took sabbatical from films" => "took a sabbatical from films"
- "during the time" => "during this time"
- "Within the first day of its release, it went on to become" => "Within the first day of its release, it became"
- "the film and her performance received mixed reviews" - that bit should be a separate sentence
- Check now--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 18:06, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "she again took sabbatical from films" => "she again took a sabbatical from films"
- That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:51, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:42, 13 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass
editSource review from Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:41, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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- @25 Cents FC – I fixed a few more things, and everything seems fine now. Pass for source review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:41, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks mate, appreciate.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 15:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Image review – Pass
edit- The only image File:KarismaKapoor05.jpg – is licensed under CC attr 3.0, and is confirmed in an OTRS ticket. Pass for image licencing. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:46, 19 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Kavyansh.Singh Can you please close the suggestions that I fixed already?. It will help me to identify the unsolved one very easily.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 19:10, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from TRM
editResolved comments from The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:01, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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*"work in Hindi films" why obfuscate Bollywood? More readers will be familiar with Bollywood than "Hindi films".
That's my first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:59, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
- I have tried to resolv concerned raised by editors. Please let me know if everyone's issues addresed. Delay in promotion not letting me nominate other list. Thank you.--25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 17:26, 15 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support this nom. Yashthepunisher (talk) 07:44, 27 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.