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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:The Rambling Man 10:40, 2 August 2008 [1].

Isobel Campbell discography edit

Okay, it's crazy. I've never nominated a list before, and I'm nominating this one after creating it without making a second edit. But still, it could make it. Red157(talk • contribs) 22:26, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • I just saw you made a second edit. Well, there goes that achievement :)
  • "Isobel Campbell performing in Bologna in 2007." – remove period. This is not a full sentence

Gary King (talk) 23:17, 22 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved stuff from Cannibaloki

Comments

  • "In 2003 she released her first album under her own name, Amorino, which recieved mixed reviews from critics." The album title should be in italic, Amorino;
  • Whom was nominated for the Mercury Music Prize? Ballad of the Broken Seas or Mark Lanegan?;
  • Music videos=1 or 2? - Infobox says that she only has 1;
  • '''''[[Swansong for You]]{{Ref label|The Gentle Waves|I|}} or '''''[[Swansong for You]]'''''{{Ref label|The Gentle Waves|I|}}, What is the difference?
  • Why using the 0 on the dates? (April 05, 1999);
  • It has no link to the record labels?
  • ^ I "As The Gentle Waves.", You can not be more specific?
  • In the singles table should be written below: "—" denotes a release that did not chart.
Cannibaloki 03:56, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, Be Black Hole Sun has fixed most of those problems, and I've made The Gentle Waves note more specific. Red157(talk • contribs) 10:13, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments
    • Other appearances is missing from the infobox, such as her work with Lanegan and Wells.
    • "part time " is hyphenated.
    • " (see Belle & Sebastian discography). " nah, make it a See also if you want, but don't have that awful "(see...)" in the lead.
    • Refs 9 to 14 all point to Mark Lanegan, not Isobel Campbell. Ensure you find correct references for all claims.
    • "Despite limited commercial success,[1] they have been called the greatest Scottish band ever.[2]" clarify you're talking about Belle and Sebastian and not Campbell.
    • Ref 3 has a badly formatted date issue.
    • "under her own name, Amorino, " her own name is not Amorino, perhaps you mean, "her first album, Amorino, under her own name."?
    • "with Mark Lanegan, the album was " this reads like two sentences so either put a full stop in or improve the flow to sound like the second clause is a continuation of the first.
    • "before another collaboration with Lanegan, Sunday at Devil Dirt, released on May 13, 2008.[6]" ditto.
    • There should be at least one EP in the infobox (as you've said she released at least one in the lead).
    • 1999 note [I] is not italics, 2000 note [I] is in italics. Pick one way of display.
    • What is the purpose of ref 15?
  • The Rambling Man (talk) 10:50, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Done I think it's all done. Oddly enough, many of those Mark Lanegan references still actually verify the chart claims, except the last one. Changed them all anyway. Red157(talk • contribs) 11:42, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I still don't see "Extended plays" in the infobox... The Rambling Man (talk) 15:33, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • What it currently is like is what I tried, the infobox doesn't link to the EP section if you click on the little thingy (I'm terrible at describing). Why is that? Red157(talk • contribs) 20:23, 23 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment - I still cannot see Extended plays in the infobox - you state quite clearly in the lead "This was followed by a solo album and EP in the same year" so there should be an EP in the infobox and a section describing EPs she has released. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:23, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ah, now I'm no longer confused. That was originally an EP (Time Is Just the Same), when I originally wrote the list (Alongside a couple of others in the singles table). Be Black Hole Sun did the simple thing and moved them all together, as they are all in fact singles (In a way). So that's just a thing that was left over that nobody spotted (besides yourself) and has now been fixed. Red157(talk • contribs) 10:24, 31 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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