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Inna discography edit

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Nominator(s): Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:12, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it is well written and reliable. I also followed the style and structure from Alexandra Stan's discography, which got two supports so far.Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:12, 29 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from TheFame08 (talk) 11:11, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comment:
  1. Romanian female recording artist Inna has released four studio albums, one of which it was reissued, 22 singles (including 10 as featured artist) and 16 promotional singles. → Romanian singer Inna has released...
  2. {{reflist|3}} → {{reflist|30em}}
  3. And the last, I think this list should have External links section. TheFame08 (talk) 06:18, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@TheFame08: All done. Thanks! --Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:26, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comment

  • Romanian singer Inna has released four studio albums, one of which it was reissued => "Romanian singer Inna has released four studio albums, one of which was reissued"
  • As she is Romanian, that chart should be listed first in each table. Did none of her albums chart at all in Romania? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:36, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: Done! Actually, Romania hasn't got an official album charts. However, Inna's first two studio albums got certified Gold in Romania, but as far as I know certifications can't be included without a chart, can they? All the best! --Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:58, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Procedural comment – Actually, I count only one support at the Alexandra Stan discography FLC right now. That's not the "substantial support" for the first FLC needed for a second nomination, per the FLC instructions. This should either be taken off FLC until that nominiation runs its course, or the Stan discography should be archived. Which would you prefer? Giants2008 (Talk) 16:09, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
@Giants2008: Actually, Azealia 911 stroke his oppose on Alexandra Stan's FLC. In reply to your question, I would prefer to archive Stan's discography FLC. Cheers! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:43, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Okay. I'll remember to close that tomorrow when I get a chance. Giants2008 (Talk) 19:22, 5 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I'll take a look at this.

Lead

  • The image needs an alt text. This is a requirement for FAs and FLs. It's good to know for the future.
  • Quickly, the track gained worldwide recognition, reaching the top twenty of the charts in most of the countries it peaked. change it to "reaching the top twenty across multiple charts. I'd normally add worldwide at the end, but that's already stated at the beginning of the sentence.
  • "Amazing", one of them, managed to peak at number one on the Romanian Top 100, while "10 Minutes", another one, marked the fourth time in a row that Inna reached the top ten in France. I don't like the "one of them". Instead, try "One of these singles was amazing, which reached the number one position on the Romanian Top 100". After 10 Minutes, the "another one" isn't necessary.
  • Her next studio album, I Am The Club Rocker, was launched in 2011. For this project... I don't think you can launch an album. You launch campaigns. Change launch to released. Also, while project is fine, I think it's better just to simply state what it was, and it's an album.
  • "Tu şi eu", the record's third single, ranked at number five in Romania, while "More Than Friends", a collaboration with Daddy Yankee, peaked at number seven in Spain... Change ranked at number five to peaked at number five.
  • Particularly, the record was released under the name of Body and the Sun in Japan. This entire sentence can be removed and be replaced by footnote D.

Albums

  • This is more of an aesthetic thing, but I like moving the refs for each album to the release date. Not necessary though.

I'll take a look at the refs tonight, but once those issues are cleaned up, I think I can give this a support. Famous Hobo (talk) 17:04, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Famous Hobo: All done! Thanks! Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:20, 8 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Frankie talk 13:19, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from FrB.TG
  • "singles featured on her debut studio album" → "singles featured from her debut studio album"
  • A redundant comma after "10 Minutes".
  • "Her next studio album" I think you can simply call it her second album.
  • "for streaming four million copies" – four million times.
  • "Inna announced the premiere of her self-titled fourth studio album in 2015" – instead you can say that she "released" her self-titled fourth album.
  • "Early 2015, it was certified Platinum in Spain" – I think you forgot to begin the sentence with the preposition "in".
  • If you are to use rowspan, please don't make tables sortable (talking about ones in § Music videos). -- Frankie talk 09:15, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@FrB.TG: All done. Happy new year! --Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:29, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for resolving them but please keep in mind that FLC quotes: "Per talk page guidelines, nominators should not cap, alter, strike, break up, or add graphics to comments from other editors". Anyway, now that my comments are addressed, I am ready to give my support . -- Frankie talk 13:19, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you so much! BTW, I have undone the striking of your comments. --Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:25, 30 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you very much! Happy new year! --Cartoon network freak (talk) 09:07, 31 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I hate to say it, but this looks like another weak support without much behind it, such as a statement that the article meets FL standards. It's fairly unusual to have two at one FLC, but it looks like the case here. If we could get a couple more reviews from experienced editors, that would be great. Giants2008 (Talk) 15:06, 5 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "one of which was reissued" not sure this is really essential in the lead, note it in the albums section.
  • "four ... 22 ... " MOSNUM.
  • "certified Gold" link "certified" appropriately, and not sure the Gold needs to be capitalised, etc.
  • "singles featured from her " no need for "featured".
  • "fourth time in a row that Inna reached the top ten in France." well according to the table, "Love" didn't chart in France.
  • "Her next studio album" be specific, perhaps "Her second..."
  • I Am The Club Rocker appears to be called I Am the Club Rocker.
  • "commercially successful throughout Europe" it charted no higher than 36 and only 76 in her native Bulgaria. That doesn't constitute "commercially successful throughout Europe" I'm afraid.
  • Party Never Ends redirects back to the list article so unlink it.
  • "available for purchase" do you mean she "released" it?
Yes I do, but "released" has been already mentioned multiple times.
  • "Tu şi eu", the record's third single" in the table this is described in English rather than Bulgarian. It also appears to be the second single, not the third, or is the ordering in the table not chronological?
Fixed it
  • It also suggests it was released in 2012.
Yes it was, but it is still featured on Party Never Ends
  • More Than Friends appears to really be called More than Friends.
  • "for streaming four" -> "for being streamed four"
  • "Following this, Inna released her self-titled fourth studio album in 2015.[A] The album's first single, "Cola Song"" according to the table, the first single from her self-titled album was "Diggy Down".
  • "number eight on the Spanish Singles Chart" you've already mentioned Spain twice prior to linking this chart. Suggest you link it first time.
  • Bel (VI) and Bel (Wal) both link to the same article.
Yes, because they're compiled by the same provider
  • Any reason SPA isn't ESP if NLD isn't NDL?
  • "Party Never Ends 2" redirects back to this discography so unlink it.
  • Not seeing 913 in Ref 6.
You have to log in to Oricon to see the sales.
  • Is it Wow or WOW? Be consistent.
  • I Need You For Christmas seems to be "for" Christmas.
  • "List of music videos as lead artist, with director" should be "director(s)" per the table.
  • Only notes that are complete sentences need a full stop.
  • Non-English-language references should have a language added to them, e.g. 43 is French, 40 is Italian, etc.
  • Look for WP:DASH fails, i.e. spaced hyphens should be en-dashes, e.g. the titles of refs 102 to 105.
  • Is it "WOW Biz" or "Wowbiz" - be consistent.
  • Antena 1 is a dab link.

So, after a quick run through, it's a clear oppose from me based on the sheer volume of issues needed to get this up to a half-decent starting point for a Featured List. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:40, 11 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, All done! Sorry for the delayed response. Yours sincerly, --Cartoon network freak (talk) 02:37, 22 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It's a big shame, but this nomination is pushing 3 months and it only has one real support, and The Rambling Man hasn't returned to strike his oppose. I'm going to have to close this to keep the FLC queue from getting stuck; feel free to renominate it if you're confident that all of the issues have been addressed. --PresN 17:59, 22 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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