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India women's national cricket team record by opponent edit

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Nominator(s): —Vensatry (talk) 06:51, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

My second list on women's cricket, this one is based on similar ones: South Africa women's national cricket team record by opponent and Pakistan national women's cricket team record by opponent. As always, look for constructive feedback. —Vensatry (talk) 06:51, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 19:26, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments pretty good, as I'd expect.
  • Lead image caption is a fragment so no full stop. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:38, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • "first competed in international cricket in " is "in internatoinal cricket" really needed?
  • "absolute victories" why do we need "absolute"?
  • "India played their first One Day International " would add "Women's" here so the acronym makes sense and so it's clear we're not accidently talking about the men's team.

The Rambling Man (talk) 09:38, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Fixed all. Thanks for the comments —Vensatry (talk) 19:22, 12 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Ianblair23 (talk) 00:03, 22 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
:Hi Vensatry, please find below my comments:
  • Lead
  • in 1976 when they played West Indies add the before West Indies
  • in a six-match Test series at home change link to Women's Test cricket
  • , New Zealand and West Indies add the before West Indies
  • at McLean Park,Napier add missing space
  • Tables
  • Bold the figures in the total rows
  • References
  • Ref 1 – link ESPNcricinfo
  • Ref 4 – formatting is different for ESPNcricinfo
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 23:47, 17 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Ianblair23: Fixed all. Thanks for the comments —Vensatry (talk) 03:51, 18 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Vensatry, further comments are below
  • Lead
Done —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • South Africa with two wins against each of them. add this ref and ref 12.
If the 'facts' can be verified from the table, there's no need to cite them in the lead. —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • They finished at the bottom of the table as they lost the remaining two games of the group stage Ref 7 doesn't show that they finished bottom of the table. Add this CricketArchive ref which does.
Added one from cricinfo. —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • they beat the International XI by 79 runs at McLean Park, Napier add ref
Done —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • India's first overseas WODI series win came at the Centenary Celebration of New Zealand Cricket in 1995 add ref
It's been cited already - together with the following sentence (ref #3). —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • As of October 2017, they have played 248 WODIs against eight different opponents they have played against 12 different opponents and add ref 13.
Corrected —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • You could add that in 12 games against Ireland and 10 against Pakistan they have yet to be defeated.
Given their 24:1::W:L ratio against SL, I'm not sure if this is a great 'record'. —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Since their first Women's Twenty20 International (WT20I) against England in August 2006 add this ref
Done —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • You could add their best result is against Bangladesh undefeated in 9 matches.
Done —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tables
Done —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Image
  • Alt text is far too long. I suggest just simply "India women's cricket team in 2009"
Not sure what's the issue here. WP:ALT says, we should avoid having the same "details" in the caption and alt text. —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 11:04, 18 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Ianblair23: Thanks for the comments —Vensatry (talk) 19:03, 20 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Vensatry, I have made some fixes to the list and now happy to support. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 00:02, 22 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Also, if you could please review Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of centuries in Twenty20 International cricket/archive2, that would be greatly appreciated. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 00:08, 22 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Everything looks good to me. Happy to support. Great job! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 18:01, 31 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Source review passed, promoting --PresN 16:10, 11 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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