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The list was promoted by SchroCat 14:00, 19 July 2014 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Hrithik Roshan filmography edit

Featured list candidates/Hrithik Roshan filmography/archive1

Nominator(s): KRIMUK90 ✉ 07:45, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

After successfully working on Rani Mukerji filmography, Aamir Khan filmography, and Shahrukh Khan filmography, this is my fourth FL nomination on the filmography of an Indian celebrity. As usual, look forward to lots of constructive comments. KRIMUK90 ✉ 07:45, 24 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Cowlibob (talk) 09:28, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

*Comment Overall. A great list as we've come to expect from you. Minor wording suggestions in the lead:

"for which he won two trophies..." --> for which he won two Filmfare awards...

"Also in 2000" --> Later in 2000

"After starring alongside...." --> In 2001, after starring....

"Koi Mil Gaya (2003)" doesn't need the (2003) as you've already mentioned it earlier

"highest grossing film of the year" --> highest grossing film of that year Not sure about this one

"earned Roshan a Filmfare Critics Award for Best Actor and a Best Actor" --> could this be clarified in some way to show it's given by two different awarding bodies of Filmfare? Currently it's a bit confusing as it says Best Actor twice.

a mention that Dhoom 2 was his third Filmfare Best Actor award perhaps?

"best actor trophy" --> best actor award Replace this on the two occasions that this appears in the lead

"Roshan played one of three" --> Roshan also played one of the three...

Maybe break up Agneepath and Zindagi into separate sentences?

"Roshan reprised..." --> Roshan reprised his double role...

Is Rediff news a credible source for his role in Aasha? I'm wary of articles which start with X things you didn't know about this celebrity..

This is probably nitpicking but the sources for his singing in Guzaarish and Zindagi don't actually specify he sang that particular song in the film. The same for his special appearances in film songs. Cowlibob (talk) 20:21, 5 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments @Cowlibob:. I have addressed all of them, except for the last two. I believe the Rediff.com source is quite credible for the Aasha info. As for the final comment, it's very difficult to find a reliable source that states the exact name of the song in which he performed. Having said that, the sources provided do state that he performed a special appearance or sang a song in that film.-- KRIMUK90 ✉ 02:36, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support Great list. Comprehensive, concise and well sourced. Cowlibob (talk) 09:28, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! :) -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 11:42, 6 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"As a child, he appeared in uncredited cameo appearances in three films directed by his maternal grandfather, J. Om Prakash" -you might add "the first of which was Aasha (1980)" just to give the reader context of what time period we're talking about immediately.
You might change "garnered" in second instance to "earned" to avoid repetition.

♦ Dr. Blofeld 11:50, 14 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@Dr. Blofeld: Done. -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 15:06, 14 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support Excellent job!!♦ Dr. Blofeld 15:13, 14 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. :) -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 15:22, 14 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I do not see any problems with this list. I may add a comment, but I think the previous comments were addressed. Therefore, there is nothing really preventing this list from being promoted.

--Birdienest81 (talk) 04:50, 17 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! :) -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 06:28, 17 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Support: I can't find any issues either. Good work! AB01 ^{I'M A POTATO} 05:50, 17 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! :) -- KRIMUK90 ✉ 06:28, 17 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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