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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Hahc21 00:32, 23 July 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Girls' Generation discography edit

Girls' Generation discography (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 15:44, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I think I have brought it up featured list status by formatting it according to WP:DISCOGSTYLE and using several featured discographies as an example. Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 15:44, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Underneath-it-All
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  • "has released six.." → have released six...
Fixed.
  • Formats: DVD → Format: DVD
Fixed.
  • The guest appearances need to be sourced.
Done.
  • All dates in the refs. should be uniform. Some are 2011-10-16 or August 20, 2011. Use only one style.
Fixed.
  • Ref 1 → remove webpage
Fixed.
Done
Done
Done. 76=79, and all other billboard refs.
  • Ref 10 → format like this: cite web|url=http://lescharts.com/showitem.asp?interpret=Girls%27+Generation&titel=The+Boys&cat=a|title=Girls' Generation – The Boys (Album)|publisher=French Charts Portal. Hung Medien (Steffen Hung)|last=Hung|first=Steffen|accessdate=June 12, 2013|language=French
Done
  • Refs 11 + 22 → g-music → G-Music
Done.
  • Ref 12 → add Prometheus Global Media as the publisher.
Done.
  • Ref 15 links to a fan site. Can another source be found?
  • Ref 21 → Oricon.co.jp → Oricon
Fixed.
  • Refs 27, 28, 31, 32 + 42 → need dates retrieved
Done.
Done.
Done.
  • Ref 72 → AllKPop.com and add 6Theory Media, LLC as the publisher.
Done.

– Underneath-it-All (talk) 16:16, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments, I've addressed all of the concerns except ref 15. I've googled and I can't find anything, should the ref be removed? Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 00:50, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
It can't be found on any Korean retail website? Then again, you aren't sourcing the other formats, so you could just remove it. Other than that everything looks really good! :) – Underneath-it-All (talk) 01:30, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
All right, I've removed it. Thanks! I've spent at least three days on it to make it look better. Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 04:40, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support – Underneath-it-All (talk) 16:03, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. Quite high quality. Minor point: Link in cite number 51 appears to be broken. — Cirt (talk) 18:46, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for noticing, I fixed it. Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 20:31, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Looks better, thanks! — Cirt (talk) 21:08, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 13:29, 15 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Quick comments (lead alone, will re-visit the tables and refs once these issues are resolved)
  • "They have sold over 100,000 copies for each of their six albums," -> "Each of the band's studio albums has sold over 100,00 copies, ..."
Done.
  • "in over 6 years" 6->six.
Done.
  • "4.9 million albums and nearly 40 million digital singles." so the 4.9 million albums were all physical or a mixture?
Fixed.
  • "Members Taeyeon, Tiffany and Seohyun have also released an EP under group name Girls' Generation-TTS." ref please.
Done.
  • "They chart debuted in" argh. "Girls' Generation's chart debut came in August 2007..." Also note that it was a single.
Done.
  • "reached the number four spot. " ->" reached number four".
Done.
  • "The song broke records" what records? "The song occupied the number one position for a South Korean chart record-breaking eight weeks"?
Fixed.
  • "After six months, they..." -> "Six months later they..."
Done.
  • "They soon released their third studio" -> They then...
Done.
  • "second self-titled album" so two albums had identical names?
Yes. A 2007 album and a 2011 album.
  • "highest selling" hyphenate.
Done.
  • " K-Pop Hot 100[7][A]." notes and refs after punctuation please.
Done.
  • "is scheduled to be released on June 19, 2013." soon to be the past, make sure it's updated and correctly referenced.
Added a ref.

The Rambling Man (talk) 16:41, 14 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your constructive criticism, I've addressed all your current concerns. Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 18:54, 14 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comment - my only issue is that some of the wikilinks actually point to articles on the Korean Wikipedia rather than the English one - is this usual practice.........? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:47, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I have no idea. I thought it would be useful, because they don't have articles on the English wiki.Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 09:14, 28 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support. However, I suggest archiving other online sources with webcitation.org, to manually archive all online references which will guarantee they remain accessible even if the site goes down: (this page (step-by-step instructions there). SoapFan12 02:17, 2 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments –

  • All caps in refs 8, 11, 28, 32, 47, 56, 58, 78, and 86 should be removed.
    • These are fixed, but I also saw all caps in ref 27, which I missed earlier. This might as well be fixed too. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:08, 7 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • The hyphens in the titles of refs 9, 28 (2 of them), 32 (also 2), 37, 42, 43, 52, 78, and 85 should be converted into en dashes per the Manual of Style. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:07, 5 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I've addressed all your concerns. Please let me know if there's any additional comments, thanks. Raykyogrou0 (Talk) 05:51, 6 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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