Comments
- " Coldplay performing at MuchMusic in Toronto, Canada in September 2011" well, MuchMusic is a television channel, so could you be more specific, or clarify more?
- Per MOS:NUM and WP:NBSP, there should be a non-breaking space -
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 737ng, use 737 ng, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 737 ng
- "United Kingdom (UK)" I really don't think "UK" is needed
- Why do you say "United Kingdom" in its first mention, then UK, which is fine, but then say "US" in its first mention. In order to be consistent, in its first mention, I'd say "United States" then say US thereafter, like it is for the UK
- "June 2005", there must be a specific day, this applies also to other stuff like this in the list
- Amazon should be written and actually is "Amazon.com"
- In notes, the letter should not be in capitals as per MOS:CAPS and should not be in bold as per MOS:BOLD, and MOS:ACCESS
- "coldplay.com" just write as "Coldplay" instead
- And, after that, link Coldplay in all references
- Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
- This one is just a bot-generated issue, so if there is nothing, just ignore it. It says, "As per MOS:DATES, dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of (if such appeared in the article) using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day."
- This one is also bot-generated , so if there is nothing, again, just ignore it. "This article may need to undergo summary style, where a series of appropriate subpages are used. For example, if the article is United States, then an appropriate subpage would be History of the United States, such that a summary of the subpage exists on the mother article, while the subpage goes into more detail."
TBrandley 02:16, 14 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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