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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 17 July 2018 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Best Male Action Sports Athlete ESPY Award edit

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Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 17:37, 20 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

We had the Best Female Action Sports Athlete ESPY Award here two months ago, and now I present you with the equivalent for male action sports athletes. It is similar to most of the ESPY lists that have attained promotion to featured list status, and will endeavour to see all queries are dealt with as soon as possible. My other FLC has multiple supports and no outstanding issues so we're all good in that field. MWright96 (talk) 17:37, 20 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from Ianblair23 (talk) 09:22, 1 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
:Hi MWright96, great work! Please find my comments below:
  • Lead
  • The Best Fighter ESPY Award trophy correct to "The Best Male Action Sports Athlete ESPY Award trophy"
  • The 2017 winner of the award was Canadian snowboarder Mark McMorris add that McMorris was the first non-American to win the award
  • Table
  • Order of refs in 2004 row needs correcting
Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 05:31, 1 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments – Other than these couple of small points, the list looks good.

  • Minor, but "the" is needed before "most successful sportspeople" in the second paragraph.
  • Comma would be helpful after Mark McMorris' name. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:17, 10 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Giants2008: Your suggestions have been taken into account and put into the article. MWright96 (talk) 05:05, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Support – Everything looks to meet the criteria now. Nice work on the list. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:05, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Comments
    • "He became the first freestyle BMX rider to be nominated for, and hence to win, an ESPY Award" - this makes it sound like as soon as he was nominated he was guaranteed to win. Suggest rewording to "He became the first freestyle BMX rider to be nominated for, and thus the first to win, an ESPY Award"
    • "The 2006 winner of the Best Male Action Sports Athlete ESPY Award was White" - it's been so long since White was previously mentioned that I think it might be worth re-stating his first name
    • Think that's it -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:52, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - all looks good now -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:08, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:19, 16 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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