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Anushka Shetty filmography edit

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Nominator(s): Kailash29792 (talk) 12:21, 12 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I've worked intensely to bring the list to its current state, and I think my efforts deserve to be fruitful. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:21, 12 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47
  • In the main image, I would revise the caption to include where it was taken.
The image caption at Commons reads, "Actress and TeachAIDS ambassador, Anushka Shetty, behind-the-scenes in Hyderabad, India before her live telecast at the 2013 Tech Awards Gala in Santa Clara, California". So could I write, "Anushka Shetty in Hyderabad, 2013"? --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • That would be appropriate to me; it would just be helpful for the reader to know where the picture was taken so identifying the city is good enough for me. Aoba47 (talk) 15:23, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Please provide ALT text for the main image.
Done: See what it is. --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the phrase (the first being S. S. Rajamouli's Vikramarkudu, which became a major commercial success,), you will need a citation to support the "major commercial success" claim.
There's this source which says "Anushka debut film was Super but she got recognition and fame with Vikramarkudu". So could I rephrase it to something like, The following year, she had four releases, the first being S. S. Rajamouli's Vikramarkudu, which helped her gain recognition? --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • That would seem fine to me; you could have kept the original sentence if you just added a source supporting that the film was commercially successful through. I am fine with either way you choose to approach this however. Aoba47 (talk) 15:23, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the sentence (In 2008 she appeared in six films, including Okka Magaadu, Swagatam and Souryam.), put a comma between "2008" and "she".
Done as asked. --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add the release years for Yennai Arindhaal and Baahubali: The Beginning and Rudhramadevi and Size Zero.
Done. --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the phrase (The following year she appeared in), put a comma between "year" and "she".
Done. --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • I would link all instance of "cameo appearance" in the table. Since it is sortable, the first instance of the term may change. Same comments applies for "special appearance".
Done. --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Wonderful job with this list. Once my comments are addressed, I will support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 20:47, 13 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the comments Aoba47. All except one have been resolved. Would it be fine to link "Bilingual film" in each cell to "Multiple-language version"? --Kailash29792 (talk) 12:09, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Thank you for your responses. I have responded to your comments above, and I think that linking "Bilingual film" to "Multiple-language version" would be appropriate in this case. Please ping me when you are done addressing my comments. Aoba47 (talk) 15:23, 14 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Aoba47, your comments have been addressed. Please tell me if there is anything else I can do. Kailash29792 (talk) 15:01, 15 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good to me; you have done a wonderful job with this. I support this for promotion. Aoba47 (talk) 16:31, 15 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support: IMO the lead is somewhat long although I don't think its a hindrance in passing the FLC. Great work on this list Kailash29792.Krish | Talk 12:45, 16 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Guys, I'll be travelling till 14 September. I hope someone will take care of the FLC in my absence. Ssven2, I hope I'm not putting pressure on you. Kailash29792 (talk) 16:21, 6 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:24, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments very good, just one thing:
  • "gained 20 kilograms of weight" convert to lbs, and I would say "in weight" rather than "of weight".

The Rambling Man (talk) 10:33, 25 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man, I've used Template:Convert here. Hope that is fine. Kailash29792 (talk) 14:20, 3 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 18:00, 19 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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