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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by User:Matthewedwards 18:59, 15 November 2008 [1].

Annie Award for Best Animated Video Game edit

My third entry for the FLC contest. Scorpion allowed me to submit this even with my second list still pending (see here). — sephiroth bcr (converse) 20:20, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved review from SRX
Review by SRX (talk · contribs)
  • Prose checks out fine.
  • The consoles shouldn't be sortable because more than one thing is being sorted in the same box.
  • The key should be in it's own section header.
  • References check out fine.--SRX 21:40, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 22:02, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - my review was resolved to meet WP:FL?--SRX 22:22, 3 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments - sources look okay, links checked out with the link checker tool. Ealdgyth - Talk 17:57, 4 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support, all issues resolved. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC) [reply]
Resolved issues, Dabomb87 (talk)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

  • Add a brief sentence or phrase to the lead that describes what ASIFA-Hollywood is.
  • "which honor contributions to animation, including but not limited to producers, directors, and voice actors." I wouldn't consider producers, directors, and actors to be "contributions" (more like contributors).
  • "In 1992, the scope of the awards were"—"were"-->was.
  • "the developers of the game must send a five minute DVD showing the gameplay and graphics of the game to a committee appointed by the Board of Directors of ASIFA-Hollywood." Hyphenate "five-minute". "showing"-->that shows.
  • "Although every nominee has been released for multiple video game consoles, Resident Evil 4 had only been released on the Nintendo GameCube by the time of the 33rd Annie Awards, which were held on February 4, 2008." Wrong year, "by"-->at.
  • In the key, "MAC OS X"-->Mac OS X
  • In the developers, column, why are some of the companies' full titles given (THQ Inc.) while some only have their name (Activision)?
  • Why don't you make the abbreviation for the GameCube GCN, which is its common abbreviation?
  • In the Gamespot refs, Gamespot is the work; the publisher is CNET Networks.
  • My point is that the present style I'm using is the one commonly used in video game articles, including practically all VG FAs. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 03:27, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
All right, not a big deal. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:42, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the Rotten Tomatoes site, Rotten Tomatoes is the work, IGN is the publisher.
  • In the Gamespy refs, Gamespy is the work, IGN is the publisher.
  • "year prior to the next"—"prior to"-->before.

Dabomb87 (talk) 01:40, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Think that's it. — sephiroth bcr (converse) 03:11, 10 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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