Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Angel Locsin filmography/archive1

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Angel Locsin filmography edit

Featured list candidates/Angel Locsin filmography/archive1

Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 21:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

With my earlier nomination having at least four supports and no outstanding issues, here's another filmography of a Filipino actress. Angel Locsin started her career over two decades ago and has achieved considerable success in film and television. Prolific in fantasy and action adventure genres, perhaps she is best known for her portrayals of superheroines and mythological creatures. An avian-hybrid, a sorceress, a werewolf, and a comic book superhero to name a few.

Created early in March, this list article has been expanded to include an interesting and readable introduction of the subject's work. I’ve tried my best to thoroughly search for RS (publications, newspapers, etc.) that are available online, since sourcing can be a challenge, especially for Filipino subject(s). Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"Critical success followed with Locsin's performances in high-profile directors' collaboration" => "Critical success followed with Locsin's performances in collaborations with high-profile directors"

Done

"Locsin's portrayals of the grief-stricken title character in the drama series The Legal Wife (2014), and the indoctrinated military nurse in the spy-action thriller series The General's Daughter (2019)," - don't need either of those commas

Removed commas

Titles starting with The should sort based on the next word of the title

Fixed

That's all I've got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:02, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: thanks very much for your review. I have addressed the above. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed. Thanks Pseud 14 (talk) 13:09, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:32, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by FrB.TG edit

"Locsin gained wider recognition and received praise for portraying Darna in the 2005 television series based on Mars Ravelo's comics superheroine of the same name." It's not clear what the television series is called. We do get the name Darna but it's not 100% clear that the series is called as the character. Perhaps something like "...portraying the title character in the 2005 television series Darna..."?

Fixed per suggestion

"During this period, Locsin also appeared alongside Dennis Trillo,[7] co-starring in the horror thriller Txt (2006) and playing a.." - co-starred, played; no need for the verb-ing modifier.

Done

"Locsin's portrayals of the grief-stricken title character in the drama series The Legal Wife (2014)[18] and the indoctrinated military nurse in the spy-action thriller series The General's Daughter (2019)[19] earned her nominations at the Star Awards, winning Best Actress .." - the "winning Best Actress" refers to "Locsin's portrayals", which makes no sense. Her portrayal did not win the award but won her the award.

I have reworded this

"Aside from acting, Locsin also" - also is unneeded when we have "aside from acting".

Done

"She has also provided" - past tense should be better since you have provided the year the film was released.

Done

Since the abbreviation is "Ref(s)", the full form should also be called "Reference(s)". FrB.TG (talk) 17:05, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done

Thank you FrB.TG, I have addressed above comments. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed or misunderstood. Pseud 14 (talk) 18:32, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Good work. FrB.TG (talk) 18:45, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Maile66 edit

I've read through this multiple times. It's a really tight, well-done piece of work. The only thing that stands out to me, is that the last paragraph of the lead has no inline source. — Maile (talk) 22:08, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Maile66: thank you for your kind words and review. I have added citations to the last paragraph in the lead. Pseud 14 (talk) 23:39, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. — Maile (talk) 23:48, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for your support and I appreciate your time in doing the review. Pseud 14 (talk) 23:50, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Z1720 edit

I am still new to FLC, so feedback and comments on my review are appreciated. This review will focus on the lede, prose, and understandability of the article.

" as the young Robina Gokongwei in the biopic Ping Lacson: Super Cop (2000)." I don't like the wikilink for Ping Lacson: Super Cop because it links to an article about Ping Lascon and not the movie, creating an MOS:EGG situation. I suggest removing the wikilink or redlinking it.

Unlinked

"Locsin subsequently had minor appearances" Delete subsequently, as the years in the Mano Po movies will inform the reader that these were subsequent to her previous work, and thus the word is redundant.

Done

"a role she later reprised in its 2005 film adaptation." Delete later, as the reader will know this is later based on the dates.

Done

'She then starred opposite Richard Gutierrez in the romantic dramas Let the Love Begin (2005)" Delete "then"

Done

"The following year, she reunited with Richard Gutierrez in the coming-of-age drama The Promise (2007)" Delete "The following year" as the year after The Promise will inform the reader of this information.

Done

"In 2016, she appeared in the comedies Everything About Her and The Third Party." This needs a citation.

Added

Why is her role blank in "Twin Hearts", "Love to Love" and "All Together Now"? What character name was she credited with in these shows?

A previous source review from one of the coords mention that if you can't reliably source the name, remove it and put a dash in the table. There are no high-quality sources for these character names outside of IMDb that I could find, and Wikipedia:Citing IMDb is considered unreliable.

Yeah, IMDB is unreliable. Perhaps there's a Filipino film board that stores this type of information? Regardless, this is not a big deal. Z1720 (talk) 12:41, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've tried, unfortunately it isn't available on any internet archives. And sadly there isn't a Filipino board that maintains these types of information. News sources are generally my go to, aside from TV Guide, Rotten Tomatoes, movie reviews or press releases from the film studio/production/network.

Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 22:44, 24 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: thank you for your review. I have actioned the above. Let me know if there are things that remain unaddressed. Pseud 14 (talk) 03:16, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. My concerns have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 12:41, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Z1720: much appreciate your support! Pseud 14 (talk) 14:08, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

AK

Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
Just a note, Template:' is for placement after something in italics, not something that is just linked.

Thanks for this and noted.

"2005 television series Darna based on Mars Ravelo's comics" → "2005 television series Darna, which is based on Mars Ravelo's comics"

Changed

That's all I could find. AryKun (talk) 15:29, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@AryKun: thanks for your review. I have actioned the above. Let me know if I might have missed something. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:47, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Nothing else I could find, so support on the basis of prose. AryKun (talk) 15:52, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed; promoting. --Pres N 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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