Wikipedia:Featured article review/Sei whale/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 2:56, 14 May 2022 (UTC) [1].
Sei whale edit
- Notified: Neil916, BulbousCow, WikiProject Mammals, WikiProject Cetaceans, WikiProject Japan, WikiProject Marine life, talk page notice 2022-03-09
Review section edit
The article suffers from a lot of issues. It has a lot of unsourced statements and some refutations/ref bomb. Most sections also need to be rewritten, like the description section and conservation status. The Mass deaths section should probably be combined with the "whaling" section. There are also some dead urls in the sourcing that can be improved, including other questionable sources that are used. OnlyFixingProse (talk) 02:57, 15 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC Population estimates needs to be update, and probably merged into conservation. Post-protection whaling section suffers from too many block quotes which make the section hard to read. Citation needed templates need to be addressed. Z1720 (talk) 15:54, 22 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC per all of the above, and skimpy lead. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:43, 25 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC per above. Hog Farm Talk 13:40, 26 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
FARC section edit
- Issues raised in the review section include sourcing, prose, structure and currency. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:47, 30 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist. Tagged for unsourced statements, in need of update, dead links and potentially dated content. Prose/structure problems, including too brief lead. DrKay (talk) 08:22, 7 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist per above, minimal edits to address concerns. Z1720 (talk) 00:27, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist lack of substantial improvements (t · c) buidhe 01:30, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist issues have not been addressed. Hog Farm Talk 14:36, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 02:56, 14 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.