Wikipedia:Featured article review/Order of the Bath/archive2
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured article review. Please do not modify it. Further comments should be made on the article's talk page or at Wikipedia talk:Featured article review. No further edits should be made to this page.
The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 8:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC) [1].
Order of the Bath edit
- Notified: Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Orders, decorations, and medals, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Numismatics, Wikipedia talk:WikiProject England, talk page notice 2022-04-25
Review section edit
This 2004 FA (last reviewed in 2006) has considerable uncited text (only some of which is tagged), missing as of dates, a listy lead, and some content that may be dated based on old sources used. Per the abundance of the use of the word today, a MOS:CURRENT review is also in order. The word also is often redundant, and often is here; there are other indications that a good copyedit is overdue, such as faulty punctuation throughout. Along with MOS:SANDWICHing, images should not be left-aligned when that offsets a list. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 20:12, 17 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC, issues persist. MOS:SANDWICH, listy lead, citations needed. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 11:17, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Move to FARC, much work still needed. Hog Farm Talk 17:13, 28 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
FARC section edit
- Issues raised in the review section include sourcing, currency and prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:13, 2 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist, considerable uncited text. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 18:07, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist, needs further citations. Hog Farm Talk 14:16, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Delist no significant progress since move to FARC. Z1720 (talk) 19:36, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 18:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.